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Tags: Anal Vore baby prey baby vore Big Belly Bones in scat Burp Burping Circlejerk crushing stomach Digestion Disposal Disposal Scat Facefarting Fart Farting farting pred Fatal Female Prey Gas Gassy gassy predator gassy preds Group vore Hypergas hyperscat infant infant vore M/F M/M m/multi M/multiple prey Male Pred Male Prey Mass Vore masturbating pred Masturbation Minor Scat Eating Multiple Preds Multiple Preys Oral Vore Pooping post vore fart Post Vore Scat Scat Shart sharting Toilet toilet disposal Underage pred Underage prey Young pred young prey
Had the inspiration to write this when my power went out fairly recently. Wrote the first few pages and some notes in an old notebook. After that, when I actually got to writing, I sort of let the characters flow out. This didn’t feel as much like smut to me, as it did a genuine character piece with vore tacked on. I’m not sure if that is conveyed to you as the reader all that well, but that’s at least how it felt to me as I was writing. Also, if you couldn't tell this thing is huge. Just over 10k words. Easily my longest I've ever written, it's big enough to be 2 and a half of my longest stories put together. This ended up becoming a bit of a passion project over this last week, I'm probably never writing something this long for Eka's ever again, but you never know. There's a focus on dialogue and characterization in this, if you're looking to get in, wank, and get out, you might want to look at one of my shorter stories, or maybe jump around in this one. Now, some disclaimers.
Also sorry if the circlejerk offends your sensibilities. I debated on including it to begin with, but I felt it really had its place. Speaking personally, I find anything sexual that’s nonconsensual to be super uncomfortable, especially involving anyone young. But this scene in particular is directly inspired by an experience I had in my youth that had a pretty healthy impact on me. A lot healthier than the unfettered internet access that led me here. But that’s neither here nor there, this felt worth addressing though. Don’t expect to see stuff like this in particular from me in the future though, because outside of this one specific fantasy of a circlejerk, it’s really not my thing at all.
Oh, also, there’s very minor scat eating. Full diaper on one of the babies that gets nommed. It’s very much an aside, it’s easy to skip past it if you don’t like it. I just tagged it in case it’s a huge deal for you.
If you enjoyed, I don’t know, favorite it and watch me I suppose. Also, Tyslan, if you happen to be reading this for some reason, I hope you upload again someday soon. You’re easily my favorite author on this website and it’s always a treat to read your work.
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Posted by Readasaur 9 months ago Report
Okay, so the description is very descriptive, but it not actually give a summary of the story or the premise?
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
Why would you need a summary of the story? That's what reading the story is for haha. The tags are there to fill in the gaps.
Posted by Readasaur 9 months ago Report
There are ten thousand words to the story, I would at least need to know the premise before I commit to reading it.
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
You don't need to read the whole story to figure out the premise haha. The characters establish what their plan is within the first page or two.
Posted by supernova1324 9 months ago Report
Awesome work loved this story really good job.
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
<3
Posted by Lilykitty 9 months ago Report
Lovely as always x3
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
<3
Posted by TrainerKatrine 9 months ago Report
Interesting read. I admittedly glanced over some things, and the type of writing, while seemingly quite accurate to "boys will be boys", wasn't quite my thing.
But it's still well-written! The disposal was a bit too "sloppy" for my own preferences, but that's fine! I'm curious, since I kinda sorta skimmed over it (I needed to do other things, so I got rougher about half way through), was it implied that the boys emptied out the abandoned school on a previous voyage? I know it states that two of them stumbled upon it when going through the woods, but I swear I caught a glance of some sorta implication, but I can't seem to find it.
Regardless, nice to see you uploading again! I quite like your works, and your style is pretty unique! I look forward to seeing your next work :)
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
Thank you :) And nah, this story is meant to be their first predatory experience. I felt like I didn't have many great options for a group to do a disposal scene. I could rotate them in and out of the same bathroom or have them all take up different bathrooms around the house, but those felt wrong to me. Same deal with it being a public restroom. I already had the woods behind them established so I just shoved an old abandoned schoolhouse in there and tried not to think too hard about it lol.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 9 months ago Report
Fair!
And jeez, first time? That's some big appetites..
I look forward to seeing your next work, especially because it's kinda funny to see since they can be super hit or miss to me xP (like the story before this one)
And for the disposal thing.. fair enough. I honestly wasn't expecting the shared bathroom time, and on initial read-through, thought they just went into the building and went in the classroom xP
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
I'm usually most compelled to write something when it doesn't exist/barely exists. Hungry Hungry Hinox was born from being annoyed there wasn't much quality ogre/anything smut on the site. This was just a passion project though lol. It's why my stories are mostly all over the place (although they will always feature gas and scat, I like those more than vore xD). And yeah, big appetites indeed haha.
I wish I wrote more but it's hard finding the energy to commit to it, at least it is for me. I'll go a year and not write anything. One day I'll have a random burst of energy and desire to create and then something happens.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 9 months ago Report
Yeah, that's fair. You get a feeling of uniqueness for creating something that isn't there, I guess!
And really? You like gas? I couldn't tell.. :p
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
xD
Posted by Xenophage17 9 months ago Report
Awesome, adore your stuff. Really love the characters and the fun back and forth as well as the fantastic gas focus.
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
<3
Posted by Xenophage17 9 months ago Report
Seriously, one of my favorite writers for your style. Little details just make it fun.
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
I care too personally about the details to avoid putting them in, even when it elongates a story a ton lol. This story itself is a great example of this. I could have glossed over everyone besides Michael but it felt wrong for me to tell a story about four predators and not touch the others.. and thus a 10k word story was born! I'm glad people enjoy them though, lol.
Posted by Xenophage17 9 months ago Report
As a reader I love it and it gives me more character types to adore although I understand it must be exhausting to overextend. I Hope you don't feel too burnt out after this.
Posted by Vanthony 9 months ago Report
Partially answered this in an above comment but I usually write something when I can't find someone else who did it first. Or its because I have an idea stuck in my head that I can't get out.
I actually have scrapped a number of stories that never got off the ground, and I have a huge list of stories that I may one day write. Hungry Hungry Hinox and A Windy First Meal were both off a list. The other ones, this one included, were spur of the moment. Well Hungry Hungry Hinox was both actually haha but yeah.
I'm not even sure if burnout is the right way to describe it. I sorta find myself getting random bursts of creativity that I feel compelled to fulfill, and then afterwards I creatively slumber for a while. Hungry Hungry Hinox was the only time in a very long time where I wrote two stories close together.
But who knows, lightning could always strike twice and I write something again in the near future. If I get another story off the ground soon, I'll post a blog about it.
Posted by Xenophage17 9 months ago Report
Well that sounds alright. My worry with burnout is that might dampen the writers desire to create or even be depressive. Your stuff is definitely worth the wait as far as I'm concerned so no worries about timing. Just pleased you decide to share it with us freely.