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Summary: May, Hoenn’s League Champion, had arrived to Lily Cove City to relax and try not to eat
NOTE: Hey Everyone, this is BlueMarvel here. It’s been a while hasn’t it? Sorry for being on silent for so long. It’s just that my job along with life’s been giving me a huge migraine of problems that ruins my concentration…not to mention confidence in writing too. It took me years to be able to get my confidence and inspiration back. So here I am.
This story here’s a Pokemon Vore fanfic and it was inspired by a fellow artist LAMPTON. It’s mostly thanks to that pic that I was able to make this fanfic. So go on and check out LAMPTON’s pics and works when you can. I’ll leave the link to said pic for you all to check out.
Also please, your honesty and criticisms are all welcomed, guys. So that said have a good day and enjoy!
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
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Posted by Nobodyman 9 months ago Report
Hey Blue. So good to see you posting a story again! Gotta say, this was a really effective short and sweet vore story and a worthy prose adaptation of the Lampton pic. Only advice I would give is, in the future, be sure to stay consistent with past/present tense. Other than that, great job! Hope to see more from you in the future!
Posted by BlueMarvel611 9 months ago Report
NB, thanks for the honest review here. And I KNEW I had missed something. I always had a problem with stay consistent with past/present tenses. I So gotta work on that one. I could use help on that front given...mostly focus on PRESENT. Not past.
Again thanks again for the review, NB.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 9 months ago Report
Oh this was done already? Could have swore you were going to throw this at me to proofread. Otherwise, nice little story you wrote. Keep it up.
Posted by BlueMarvel611 9 months ago Report
Oh sorry....it's been a long while and what I've been through, my memory's been acting up. If you want to proof read still, I would use the help. I'm working on another one right now even as I speak. But mind proof reading this chapter so I could take notes for the future?
Elias Azule
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 9 months ago Report
Yeah, I can still do that.
Posted by BlueMarvel611 9 months ago Report
Ok. I'll let you know when I get my next work done. But mind proof reading THIS one so I may know what I can do to improve?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 9 months ago Report
It shall be done. Can't give an ETA, but I will do so. Expect a PM in the near future.
Posted by BlueMarvel611 9 months ago Report
Sure and I'll get my next work to you THROUGH PM when I finish that one. Laters