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It's that special time of year again. That time when all of the tasty prey find their way into the bellies of predators. That time when gurgling stomachs are filled, and tummies get rubbed both from the outside and the inside. Happy vore day everyone! I hope you all enjoy this story full of noms.
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Posted by Mourtzouphlos 8 months ago Report
I LOVED that conversation at the end. As soon as she called it messed up I knew it was the difference between being unwilling to introspect for fear of what you would find, and not being afraid to find the exact thing (As a one-liner: "The difference between us is that I do not feel the need to pretend that I'm moral"). Also, I'm not sure I believe Diana when she says her ideal world wouldn't have predation: she enjoys it too much (Ironically, I could believe it about Edita; cognitive dissonance is hard and requires effort to keep up).
I did notice several typos: 'sigh of releif s she', 'I didn't aask him', 'Edia pushed', 'Specicial' (in the title).
Posted by RexTheWolfdog 8 months ago Report
Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my story as much as you did! I'm really glad that the theme of the story came across as well as it did. It's such a subtle distinction that I worried I hadn't done it justice.
Also, thank you for finding those typos. I've fixed them now. Obviously, even last-minute changes need to be run through a spell checker, a step that I overlooked this time... oops.
Posted by Mourtzouphlos 8 months ago Report
Don't worry, you did. I've actually been thinking about something that does explore some similar themes, and this has absolutely given me an idea about what I want to do with a couple of characters.
Posted by TheGreatSako 4 months ago Report
Phew, never thought of it like that before. What a special, especially depraved kind of twisted~