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The Last Straw By AFFY -- Report

A farm can grow any number of things under the right condition. Even jealously.

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Trying something new and wanted to get it uploaded in time for Vore Day but it wasn't meant to be! So happy late 8/8 day!

Eka's stance on AI generated art is strict, but fair, so I won't be uploading any pictures of it here. However in trying something new, I wanted to link portraits of the characters featured in this story that I worked on bringing to life. So below you'll find the three main characters references as you read! Enjoy!

Belle: https://freeimage.host/i/belle.dlCVqyg

Ava: https://freeimage.host/i/ava.dlCVf8F

Owen: https://freeimage.host/i/owen.dlCVKa1

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ggg74

Posted by ggg74 8 months ago Report

I quite liked this are you thinking of make a sequel? I really want to see their relationship develop.

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

Nothing planned yet, as I've got a handful of other stories that I want to finish first. Though I really enjoyed writing this and have a few ideas of what I'd like to do in a sequel, so we'll see!

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 8 months ago Report

I wish Sylvia and Owen had a meeting to realize what happened. Great story though!

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

That would have been interesting! Thank you for the kind words!!

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 8 months ago Report

Wow, amazing story! Really enjoyed the struggle, I wasn't sure if the cowgirl would throw up. I'm amazed that farmer resisted the urge to get intimate with belle also :D

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

I'm sure the thoughts crossed his mind, more than he'd like to admit. It gets lonely on a farm, especially when your fiancée isn't around anymore!

And thank you for commenting, it's great to know you enjoyed it!

hard2digest

Posted by hard2digest 8 months ago Report

No one writes characters and scenarios in Vore stories like you do. You make me care about these people. I hope you write a book one day and somehow get published. You deserve it.

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

Words fail me, but simply put: your comment was the kindest thing you could say, and I really appreciate that. So thank you, and I look forward to sharing more stuff in the future for you and everyone else to dive into!

Raesetsu

Posted by Raesetsu 8 months ago Report

This is by far my favorite story on the site. Lot's of factors going into this, the length of digestion, how unaware Owen was and the fact he helped Belle digest Ava, the little pat from Owen on Belle's stomach of what remained of Ava, holy shit I could go on and on! And the casualness of the discussion between Owen and the vet...so good! Too bad the vet didn't really do her due diligence and tell Owen what could have happened or poor Ava might have lived :D. Good thing for the readers though, your play on our emotions is king! And I agree with the other commenter, if you wrote a full story and published it on amazon, I'd buy it right away! Didn't think I'd see F/F from you either so that's also a massive treat, and hopefully in the future you have time to come back to this and write a sequel, lots of loose ends to tie up, like does Owen realize he has someone who needs him right in front of him? Does he find out what happened to Ava? And I really want him to take care of Sylvia, that's the only part I really feel bad about :(

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

That's an extremely high praise—thank you so much!

It took more than twice the time I initially expected to finish it cause I wanted to flesh out the world more with details and little extra tidbits—I'm happy it paid off!

The story is lacking a traditional denouement, as like life, things aren't always wrapped up neatly with a bow. I did it for that reason, but as well, leaving myself open to return for a sequel without it feeling contrived.

I really enjoyed writing this though, and look forward to returning to it's world one day!

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 8 months ago Report

I have to say that you’ve done a fantastic job with this story. The entire story was well-paced and intentioned. A meticulous craftsmanship that built up the characters, their motivations, and the necessary elements of the world that surrounded. To develop a sense of tension before the actual meat of the story that many people look forward to on this site. Specifically the dramatic collision between Belle and Ava that was coming in like a train wreck. A harrowing development that I could not tear my eyes away from, and I loved it. I would like to say more about the actual vore and digestion scenes, but I would be repeating stuff that other commenters already said. I would have preferred a more extended digestion scene, but that is just my own bias speaking and it could have come at the cost of the excellent pacing that your narrative exhibited. This might have been posted a little bit after Vore Day, but this was probably my favorite story that I read for the 8/8 week.

I’m looking forward to whatever work you will pump out next.

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

It was great reading what made the story stand out for you, I really do appreciate it!!

For me personally I would have liked to of extended out the digestion more. Though I feel that way in everything I write haha. I do tend to look at those moments as the meats and potatoes of the story cause, after all, it's all led up to that moment. You want to enjoy it for as long as you can!

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 8 months ago Report

this was fucking great

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

Glad it was up your alley! That means a lot so thank you!

AlbertKwon9182

Posted by AlbertKwon9182 8 months ago Report

Beautiful story

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 8 months ago Report

That means a lot so thank you!!

AlignedOrbit

Posted by AlignedOrbit 7 months ago Report

Absolutely stunning writing. Definitely in the top 3 stories that I've read. Keep it up, and can't wait se see what else you have in store!

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 7 months ago Report

Thank you! And yes, there's much more that I'm working on!

MadElk

Posted by MadElk 1 month ago Report

God, this account is like a treasure chest, I'm so happy I found it!
This story is my fave so far~
Would have loved some focus on cows having multiple stomachs, but maybe that'll come in a future story hehe~

This was a real treat to read!!

AFFY

Posted by AFFY 4 weeks ago Report

So glad you've enjoyed what I do! :)

I really enjoyed writing this one and plan on making a sequel. Belle having multiple stomachs was something I initially wanted to explore, and I'd love to revisit that idea in a future installment!