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Locker Room Accident By iliapoerion -- Report

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My first upload in my new gallery, woo! This is one of the stories I've had lying around for a few years, chosen pretty much at random. Let me know what you think!

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SunsetSteady

Posted by SunsetSteady 8 months ago Report

Really cute! Nice for a short story, good job leaving whatever happens later with Anna and Danica up to the imagination.

Whereaminow27

Posted by Whereaminow27 8 months ago Report

It would have been cooler for her to have never eaten anyone in the first place.

iliapoerion

Posted by iliapoerion 8 months ago Report

As in, this is how she finds out she is a predator?

Whereaminow27

Posted by Whereaminow27 8 months ago Report

^^

iliapoerion

Posted by iliapoerion 8 months ago Report

Don't worry, I've got some first time predator stories written and many more ideas. For this one, though, I liked how casual Anna is about the whole experience, which made more sense if she had done it before.

doomed

Posted by doomed 8 months ago Report

I love it