Posted by Mrsnugglepug 8 months ago Report

very nice story!

Posted by Nandelion 8 months ago Report

thank you!

Posted by Mrsnugglepug 8 months ago Report

you don't post much but when you do its always a good one!

Posted by Assriel88 8 months ago Report

Love it (Yanqing didn’t ruin my 50/50 so i got her)

Posted by Nandelion 8 months ago Report

I'm glad to hear that. Keep your Yunli well-fed and Yanqing taking Ls (saving for E2 Sparkle, so I'm gonna get Yunli on her rerun).

Posted by Assriel88 8 months ago Report

Wonder if she'll ever get to meet blade (I'm saving for feixiao now)

Posted by Livinglumi 8 months ago Report

i finally got my yunli after having to grind for three weeks straight. i initially lost my fifty fifty to gepard but last Friday i was able to get my yunli. i know this is a vore site but I'm happy i got her. also yunli is a bluenette you can cleary see it in game. i understand if it was a mistake. Great story.

Posted by Nandelion 8 months ago Report

Thank you. Nice on getting her after putting all that effort, 50/50 when it goes wrong is a real headache. I know plainly telling about it kinda sounds like a flex, but hearing you're happy with her is great to me. I really like her too (if this story length didn't make that obvious)

Also, I looked up her hair color before writing this story, it's actually navy gray. I mentioned it as 'navy gray' at a late portion of the story, so my oversight is more about not being specific with it sooner. Anyway, thanks for pointing it out too.

Posted by Livinglumi 8 months ago Report

i didn't know that. it just looked more strongly blue in the game so that was why i was confused. the yunli pull was the first time i lost fifty fifty. my last pull was firefly and i got her in my first ten pull. I'm putting together a team of march 7th,firefly, yunli and lingsha once she releases just to see how well they play together in a team.

Posted by Livinglumi 8 months ago Report

also forgot to mention that i had to give up my original plans to get both yunli and sparkle this patch after i lost the fifty fifty. maybe i will still get sparkle but i feel burnt out from grinding that i need to take a break from the game for a bit.

Posted by Nandelion 8 months ago Report

Oh, you also got Firefly, nice (It took 2 10-pulls for me, heh). The team you mentioned tho, assuming that's March (Hunt), Lingsha works well (I only heard vaguely what she provides) but Yunli and Firefly kinda conflict with each other, as one is a Follow-up dps while the other is a Break one.

Swapping out Yunli with Harmony MC works better for FF or swapping FF with your strongest support works for Yunli. The rest of the team should be a solid go.

It's okay to make that team, but for harder content you should take a second look at it.

Posted by Fatedmeal 8 months ago Report

Finally got around to reading this great story!

Loved the way you detailed combat between these two young and monstrous prodigies. My adoration continued unbroken when one conquered the other with specific utilization of the dust-laden and wrinkled underbelly of her sole. Of course, in vein with the theme of this site, I must not fail to mention that you exquisitely handled the vore scenes in this story. From evoking imagery with your diction to the precise comparisons you made (the muffin that Yunli’s burgeoning abdominal swell became with the brawn of her thighs merging hotly with her tense dermal layers was an amazing inclusion). Of course I’m biased in saying all this due to my inclination towards vore and feet. I will give a nod to the excellent attention to the seemingly endless cacophony that spilled from the young combatant’s garrulous insides.

Posted by Nandelion 8 months ago Report

Yay!

Thank you for reading it.

'The conquering of the other with one's soles' was def necessary, heh. I mean it was Yunli, and along with her hot temperament, it laid out the grounds for her to humble him with her feet. It really was a golden opportunity that I couldn't miss and I had a lot of fun with it!

As for the vore scenes, well, I feel it's a tad obvious that I've taken a strong inspiration from some of your recent stories (especially the Silver Wolf one is just chef-kiss...). You make use of some really creative and powerful expressions (can't forget all the flavorful onomatopoeia you come up with!) that helped me come with mine. Keep being as amazing as you are.

Biased or not, I always appreciate your comments. I'm working on being more consistent so your words really encourage me.

Posted by AphWishes 6 months ago Report

Super late comment to this I know but this is a super good story and it came out really well—

For one the title is just good lol but in general it’s just such a good story between the two and feels just right to their characters in the process~! Besides who can say no to Yunli melting Yanqing down, it’s very good uwu

Posted by Mrsnugglepug 4 months ago Report

Are you still planning on doing the sparkle one... possibly anal vore? Asking for a friend ( that freind is me)

Posted by Giorno1234 4 months ago Report

Would love to see a Ruan Mei story from you