Posted by Nebbie 8 months ago Report

Hmm, I must say it seems a little bit anticlimactic for Rarity to do nothing at all to Rainbow's plot, given how ponies are normally fine with butt touching. I get Rarity wanting to keep things down for the fillies, but these are three ponies who obsess over butts literally in most of their episodes, surely she could at least have given a slap or stealthily used her tongue when they would barely notice.

Looking back through the fics, it seems like there's a successive reduction in mouthplay on the plots, actually; Pinkie got some pussy-lapping, then AJ got a slight pussy touch, then Fluttershy got a simply butt rub, and now Rainbow goes in without anything at all!

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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 months ago Report

Not to worry, I've been pondering that myself. The sexier stuff might make a resurgence.

Also, I had Rarity's nibble and so on to "make up for it" specifically because of Rarity avoiding it.

Not sure what you mean by three of the ponies "obsessing over butts" though. Do you mean the show, or me and Hermlover's stories?

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Posted by Nebbie 8 months ago Report

The CMC's entire thing being their butt marks.

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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 months ago Report

Well, that's more to do with the talent the butt pictures represent, not the butts they're attached to.

For example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hajdz2YFKpM

That all said, I'm now wondering about adding in a reference to their fixation on getting their cutie-marks if I ever write something where they're prey (again). Thank you for the unexpected inspiration!

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Posted by sheppard74 8 months ago Report

Great story.
the idea of the CMC watching and thus reducing the amount of naughty Rarity can do is a nice touch.
All in all great story and look forward for what Twilight and Spike will get.

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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 months ago Report

Thank you.

It will, as you know, be a while, but I don't doubt you and everyone will enjoy what I will create. You all seem to like what I've done so far!

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Posted by Firenhooves 8 months ago Report

Oh boy! This is a fun story! It really brings you into their world getting the extra perspectives from the CMC watching.

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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 months ago Report

That was a big part of my thinking on having them in this.

I'm glad this was fun to read for you.

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Posted by coolbreeze 8 months ago Report

Thank you for this.

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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 months ago Report

I'm enjoying writing it (despite some moments of frustration) just as much as you all are reading it. Just, enjoying it differently.

You're very welcome, and I hope the rest of my work will be just as good for you all to read!

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Posted by coolbreeze 8 months ago Report

I am curious to know if the Crusaders will continue to be involved in this story with any of them following the example of the Mane 6 and Spike? Or perhaps one of them following the example of Rarity in eating ponies?

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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 months ago Report

I don't want to spoil anything. If you REALLY want me to, I can PM it to you.

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Posted by coolbreeze 8 months ago Report

That's up to you. I'm glad you do have some plans for them. If you do want to share some details just to get my opinion, feel free. But I can wait to find out what happens if you have things planned out.

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Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 months ago Report

I'll think it over.

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