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Tags: acid burns ambivalent prey Blowjob Breasts brutality Casual vore charity Digestion Disregard of Life Fast Digestion Fatal Feet first Female Prey Foot Fetish Foot licking gamer boy Gamer girl Graphic digestion Humiliation Livestream M/F Male Pred misogyny Oral Vore Painful Digestion Public Nudity public sex public vore reluctant prey screaming prey Speedrunning spine snapping Sweat Sweaty Breasts sweaty feet there's a charity tag on this website lmao Unwilling Prey
PinkJazz stumbles back into the building with her hair all frizzled and throws this down like a bomb before sprinting away. Anyone here a speedrunning dork? No? Just me? Well I threw in some graphic digestion at the end to reward you for sticking through my self-indulgent gamer fiction. Ten squillion points to anyone who slides into my DMs to share their Banjo Kazooie PB
What do I even call Kara? She's not exactly unwilling, just annoyed. Ambivalent prey? Peeved prey? Leave me alone I just want to play video games prey? I think I've stumbled onto a whole new genre here. Speaking of which this is my first story with no bathroom stuff in it, much to the pleasure of the general public and the chagrin of my die-hard fans. I thought about adding some, but the parallel of the boss battle and the belly battle ending the same way was too delicious to pass up.
Yeah THAT'S RIGHT. I put THOUGHT INTO THIS SHIT. I'm an ARTIST MOTHERFUCKER.
Love ya ❤️
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Posted by JustNothing 7 months ago Report
Masterpiece, but NO BATHROOM STUFF?! Only a 9.5/10 and with that the lowest rated story you made so far, I'm disappointed and my day is runied. (Was a Joke I love your stuff)
Posted by Randomdude5 7 months ago Report
Here is my hypothesis as to when Kody dumps Kara. Mousellie whispered her hotel room number into Kody's ear. I think that Kody shows up to Mousellie's room, and then Kara decides it it time to leave Kody's body. Mousellie's room has a toilet rated for girlcrap, so Kody uses it. Maybe Mousellie decides to watch. Later they have some fun together, which would probably involve Mousellie getting eaten.
Of course there is the option that Kara moves thru Kody's body much faster.
Posted by JustNothing 7 months ago Report
Oh I loooove that <3
Posted by LuridLuncheon 7 months ago Report
Well right into favs this goes!
Posted by Randomdude5 7 months ago Report
I enjoyed this story, so I guess I will post some of my thoughts about it, and mention what I liked, and what I found sexy.
I like the idea of the speed running competition with donations. It shows how normalized girls getting eaten is, and that is something I like. I like how Kara is not alone in the speed running tournament, but has DamienDanger, and XxLucillexX there with her. Another thing I like in your story is how Gabriella is actually trying to be the girl that gets eaten. I also like Kara's strategy to try to avoid being eaten. It makes sense that the sexiest, and most skimpy dressed girl would be the one that receives the most votes to be liquefied. Kara wants to break records, not be a belly stuffer, and I like that even tho this is a vore story. I liked the details about the boys characters. ItzZanie pushing all the sliders to the max, KingHadrian's Papa Smurf, and Sneeky's lore accurate character all sound like character ideas that people would use. I like how Kody thinks Kara is hot. I like how the guy who thinks Kara is hot happens to be the guy that gets to eat her later. I also like the detail where Kody failed the Gaping Maw boss fight and got his Kara character eaten. One thing that bothers me is that if the goal of eating Kara is to kill her in the stomach as fast as possible, then Kody probably should have eaten her head first. That way she could have been face down in his acids, and drown quickly. Since the timer only starts when Kody takes the final gulp it would be possible for her to drown before he does so. I guess the easiest solution to this, is that the rules of speedrunning the digestion of girls requires the girl to be eaten feet first. I like how Kara struggles to stay alive even tho it is pointless. While I prefer slow digestion, it also make sense for there to be a contest to see how fast Kody can digest Kara, since it is a speed running competition.
There were several other things that I really enjoyed. I REALLY like how DamienDanger had a XxLucillexX shaped bulge in his middle. If anyone should get to eat Lucille, it should be Damien, since they were friends, and hanging out together with Kara. I also like how Sneeky, and Gabriella crept off of the stage. I assume that they are going to have sex before he eats her. Personally I would have preferred more details about Lucille's digestion, and Gabby's fun time, but that is not what the story was focusing on so it is fine.
Don't feel selfish for having gaming speedrunning in your story. It added buildup, that gave details about the characters, and provided some context for why the vore was happening. As for what Kara is, I like your descriptions. Maybe reluctant prey is anther helpful term. As for there not being disposal, maybe time from consumption to defecation could have been part of the "Girls done quick" contest.
I enjoyed your story, and I hope this ramble is something that makes you feel good about your writing.
Posted by PinkJazz 7 months ago Report
Thank you!
Worth noting that the lack of bathroom stuff was more as a result of wanting to keep a certain story structure and consistency, rather that something I wanted but couldn't slot in
Posted by Kelly 7 months ago Report
DAMN This is the Urn. POGGIES IN CHAT, She got digested in half an A Press amazing!
Posted by Justsomeone 7 months ago Report
Jesus Christ this story
Posted by teamfortress32 6 months ago Report
I'm generally not into willing prey, but this story might be what gets me into willing-to-unwilling. I absolutely love the way she starts out merely annoyed and ends up screeching in agony
Posted by DeerlyDigested 6 months ago Report
Really like the casual nature of women being men’s food, super good stuff