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A sequel to my "Substitute Snake" stories and another commission. Mr. Hiss, the talking reticulated python, is keeping his two current pregnant meals stuck but unharmed in his gut, and he's convinced poor John, who's girlfriend he guzzled up, to help him cover it up...and to join him and his sister on a trip to Hawaii!
Enjoy.
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Posted by Personad 6 months ago Report
Very nice to see the relationship between Jone and Mr.Hiss deepen.
And god, just reading this makes me want to write more snake stories with pregnant prey.
Posted by Vorelover98 6 months ago Report
Why not just have them get digested? This plays it so safe
Posted by saintheartwing 6 months ago Report
Well, it's not what the commissioner wanted
Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 6 months ago Report
How are they still alive im not talking about digestion im talking about how they went through a month inside of a snakes stomach without eating or drinking
Posted by saintheartwing 6 months ago Report
I'm thinking he swallows down food, drink for them
Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 6 months ago Report
Were melinda and alice willing or unwilling
Posted by saintheartwing 6 months ago Report
Unwilling I believe
Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 6 months ago Report
When will he release them
Posted by saintheartwing 6 months ago Report
The commissioner wants this to be basically "eternal endosoma". They've not decided yet if he lets them go.
Posted by Stardust1dragon 6 months ago Report
I think it would honestly be really disappointing if our MC did all this work for the snake and he never follows through on his end of the deal to release them.
Posted by salamoun 6 months ago Report
This story is really going down some unexpected ways, but it is quite enjoyable and interesting to follow so I am kinda excited to see where this will go.
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 5 months ago Report
This is one of my favorite series on the whole site. Well done!!
Posted by saintheartwing 5 months ago Report
Thanks!