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Massive Thanks to MrQuarantine who helped me with a tone of graphical errors as well as contributing his own portion into the story. I've place **** on the parts where his writing begins and ends.

Chapter 2 to my teacher character Carol! Quite Some time has passed since Carol absorbed her favourite student Jess. Carol desperately tries to help a failing student in her class.

It's a bit long winded and the longest story I've so done far. Hope it's ok as I don't consider writing my strong suit.

Chapter 1:https://aryion.com/g4/view/885924

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theprinceh

Posted by theprinceh 5 months ago Report

Nice, glad you doing more stories.

PickleLord

Posted by PickleLord 5 months ago Report

Thank you! Hope you like this one and it's not too bloated.

doomed

Posted by doomed 5 months ago Report

Oof poor Jess . I love how this story shows that carol is delusional

thequietmanno1

Posted by thequietmanno1 4 months ago Report

Dang. This is dark.

PickleLord

Posted by PickleLord 4 months ago Report

Too dark?

thequietmanno1

Posted by thequietmanno1 4 months ago Report

pretty dark.

Are we at the point of the story wherein it become clear the protagonist is the villain all along?

PickleLord

Posted by PickleLord 4 months ago Report

Interesting question. Depends on if you see Carol's point of view on things, could see her as being the protagonist who is actually the villain.
But if you're thinking of Jess being the protagonist, then she is part of Carol who is the villain, so she's the villain too. XD