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Knights, Temples, and Frogs By skorpio -- Report

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An adventurer explores an abandoned temple looking for missing people, but this adventure might be biting off more than she can chew...

It might not look like it at first, but this is a continuation of this story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/1079286

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FuzzyCakes

Posted by FuzzyCakes 4 months ago Report

frog lord!

skorpio

Posted by skorpio 4 months ago Report

Frog lord indeed.

MasterGryph

Posted by MasterGryph 4 months ago Report

Interesting. The Moon Knights seem to be spread over a larger territory than I thought.

Interesting contrast between Trena (who's powers are an unusual mixture but practiced and known to her) and Keva (who is still figuring out what she can do here).

skorpio

Posted by skorpio 4 months ago Report

The Moon Knights are spread out over quite a large area, but they usually operate alone like Trena or in small teams.

Dooot

Posted by Dooot 4 months ago Report

Would the Frog Lord's soul eating the otber spuls erase them permanently?

Also Trena and the scholars are so lucky to be in an angel's soul. Especially since angels would be direct servents of their gods, no? They should probably show more reverence.


I like the story so far. Though I really wish you'd be a bit more descriptive of the events unfolding. How did it feel for the people inside the froglord when Keva ate them all? How does having multiple souls inside of her feel? Did Trena even taste good?

skorpio

Posted by skorpio 4 months ago Report

Digestion isn't possible in Trena's soulscape, so if the Frog Lord ate anyone they would be stuck in her stomach until she either let them out or they managed to escape; not dangerous, but probably annoying.

In time Trena's probably going to be a bit more reverent, but at the moment she's more upset by what she sees as a failure in her mission to think of much else.

When I come back to this storyline, I'll make sure to show from Keva's point of view what's it like to have souls inside her.