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Dumbstruck - 1 By RedInstead -- Report

It is true that an unexempt male can escape from even an experienced pred if he's big enough.

You should focus your energy on throwing off her balance rather than trying to fight her swallowing directly. The throat muscles are fast, powerful, impossible to grip, OR escape from - you're on a conveyor belt to her boiling belly and you MUST get off before that point. The moment you're in those stomach walls your weight advantage becomes her weight to take advantage of.

Kyle here was born with the fortune of shrinking less through puberty than almost all of his peers, and he 'grew' a little overconfident... and he left this world the same way most of his class mates did, fighting the inevitable

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Perodian

Posted by Perodian 4 months ago Report

It sounds like he went to a girl's place with no plan. Not a clear idea of what to do. If that was the case, why show up to begin with?

RedInstead

Posted by RedInstead 4 months ago Report

Yeah the original version of this was a lot larger... 17 pages cut down to 6

It started with him leaving his house, and his neighbor hitting on him as he leaves the door, and him reacting like any male should in this world which is taking it with a bit of caution - As he continues on with his day we learn for most of his life he wasn't subjected to the same kind of overt vore threats that men who were smaller than him experienced.

I wanted to show him rationalizing himself a little bit of survival guilt into 'Well clearly I don't need to be as cautious as other guys', in this world men come in a variety of sizes while women are normal height but have the ability to eat people. His neighbor seems as confused as he was by his sudden change of attitude when he's awkwardly trying to return her flirting, because it is a quick change of character that he's forcing.

I rewrote it frankly due to lack of confidence- I spent over 2 weeks planning that out while constantly getting comments from people that don't understand I don't make it my mission to make as much smut as possible... Just things that I think are good, and that takes time. There's an infinite amount of free smut out there

nc

Posted by nc 4 months ago Report

You made her look so perfectly beautiful - no wonder she is the perfect predator for adult males.

friemeltje1

Posted by friemeltje1 1 month ago Report

really straightforward yet really hot - these 2 are perfect!