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Well, first off, Merry Christmas everyone! My gift to you all: 12k words of first-time centaur pred ^^
A story that follows Sophie, a young centaur herm, who on her latest growth spurt and appetite spike... starts getting less food from her mom, and some less-than-subtle encouragements to start eating humans like a centaur should... Not wanting to go out and try her luck on the streets, Sophie ends up trying out a site to meet and eat willing prey. Surely there's no way anyone she knows could be on there...
This story took me SO much long than expected, sorry about that! I actually started three different times, twice in a fantasy setting before getting to this more modern one... and realizing that the problem with my first tries was that I needed to get some prey perspective going... and then I stalled for like, two or three weeks on the sex parts of the story! So all in all, this took me forever, and I'm very glad to finally be posting it!
Hope you all enjoy!
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Posted by Person955 4 months ago Report
I always love finding great writers. Lovely story~!
Posted by PaperWriter 3 months ago Report
I always love being found! And thank you! ^^
Posted by Perodian 3 months ago Report
There are several hints in the story leading up to the reveal that she is going to eat her friend, which I'm sure are intentional since they get more clear as the story progresses, which helps tell the reader that her first time with a prey will be extra special because of it. It also implies that she may be more willing to reveal her true self to her friends now that she knows at least one of them was completely accepting of her hidden lower half's feature.
Posted by PaperWriter 3 months ago Report
I had a lot of fun with trying to foreshadow the connection between them, it's not often I have a connection between pred and prey like this so I wanted to get the full effect... definitely glad to hear it worked for you!
Hopefully we'll get to see a sequel to this with one of her other friends, Sophie was a fun pred to write, and I'd love to watch her get more predatory and confident! Sure, I really suck at writing sequels with the ridiculous number of new story ideas I've stocked up... but I hope I do it!