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The third part of an ongoing story.
The angel Keva saves some captives from slavers, but can she get them to safety, or will their pursuers get the better of them? Or... maybe she can protect them in her own way...
The first part of the story is here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/1079286
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Posted by MasterGryph 4 months ago Report
Escort the captives to Exminster - QUEST CANCELLED
So what's the next step for Keva? Visiting Exminster just lost its urgency, but what other leads does she have?
Keva just unlocked a new ability as well, but doesn't know what it is...
Posted by skorpio 4 months ago Report
Since she doesn't have any leads, visiting Exminster might be her best to look for information about what she could be doing to help people. Her last two quests were just things she stumbled on out in the wilderness, so it's probably time to start seeking out things that could be done.
Posted by Dooot 4 months ago Report
I've read a good chunk of your stories, so I can comfortably say this is your best story yet.
The amount of detail you put into how Keva feels about eating people, her soul scape, and the vore process, is much appreciated. Kinda makes me wish Keva keeps some of them aside from the Frog Lord inside of her forever.
Only criticism I have is that I kinda wish you elaborated on hoe Rand, Mia, and Soerra felt about arriving in the soulscape the same way you did for Tresea. Also this is a dumb minor nitpick, but I kinda wish Mia's vore sequence was elaborated on. Maybe Keva was kinda forceful with her seeing as she doesn't fully trust Keva and vice versa.
All in all, a great story. Kinda makes me really want to see Ashley eat Megan now.
Posted by skorpio 4 months ago Report
Looking back on this I think I rushed the end a bit; I wished I had elaborated on Mia being swallowed. Still, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.