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Time to go~ *Literally* nothing to see here, move along.
This is the clean/censored version (it's missing something big in the middle...).
Disposal version ( !!WARNING!! BIG POO / SCAT / TURD / etc. ):
https://sta.sh/0yel6ggxkgd
I'll admit I got lost in making this. Looking back, the mound (in the dirty version!) is way bigger than it should (considering the last belly stage size), but I don't care, I like things big... :V
Also this is where I was stuck at since 2 years ago. It was a rather challenging crosshatching project for me, so I couldn't work on it at any less than in good shape (took me long enough to get in shape). Don't ask why I didn't just fill and shade with a soft brush, I didn't feel comfortable mixing in that style (it's not out of my skillset and I should've just done that, but oh well). I'm quite happy with the result at least.
(still talking about the dirty version. This censored version is missing a BIG centerpiece I wasted a lot of time on, essentially). But now it's done and the remaining pages were done pretty quick after that. The comic was supposed to end here, but I couldn't help stretching it as usual. I'll admit I had a lot of fun doing that, as well the censored edits such as the ones on this page :D
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Posted by Stuff76 3 months ago Report
I think the sequence came out great! The main thing I noticed was that you kinda implied that she ate someone else earlier and didn't really resolve that
Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report
Right! Kinda forgot about that, but really what's implied is that the same thing happening in this comic had just happened prior to page 1. The complete process. So the delivery girl or whoever that was had already been "dumped" in a different spot some time earlier (I think that's who I meant to imply? a comment on page 01-2 suggested a delivery girl and I think they're right, the stuff I put on the ground checks out :) ) Definitely something I would've alluded to in some background detail or something if I thought of it. Too late, sorry :T
Posted by Stuff76 3 months ago Report
It is how it is. I wish I had your dedication to drawing where I could make action sequences like this.
Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 3 months ago Report
Nice to see this finally finished
Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report
Amen.
Posted by Xenophage17 3 months ago Report
Massive pile in the uncensored, awesome
Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report
You know it!
Posted by Xenophage17 3 months ago Report
Big meal makes a big pile, just nature at work in an entertaining way.
Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report
Still think I screwed up, it's too big for the last belly size (I went with the first belly size instead ><) but I don't see anyone complaining B)
Biggest screw up, at least what bothers me most, is with the P4 last digestion cutaway, it's just an acid bath. Where the poop go? Why is there suddenly poop in its place next panel? Total oopsie on my part, didn't realize until much later. I could've made a very different and cool belly shape for it instead. Oh well, next time :v At least it works for the no poop alt version I made for here. Until the basketball belly :^)
Posted by Xenophage17 3 months ago Report
That is some major attention to detail but your probably shouldn't be so hard on yourself. Especially since since it's pretty difficult to determine an exact size conversion from person shape to turd pile. It certainly has the required effect for me at least. As for the last bit of part 4 I assumed all the mass was in the intestines, just not outlined in the cross-section. Hope I'm not overstepping bounds with this comment, as I've said I'm no artist.
Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report
Loll no not at all!! And yeah no I don't think I'm being hard on myself, it's just a "d'oh, this doesn't make as much sense as I thought" moment. The pile size was a very easy fix, but again for this one I actually prefer larger size so I'm brushing that one aside. The acid belly tho, yeah no, there's no space for it anywhere. I messed up. It's not important at all ofc, but with all the things I try to make consistent (and there's a kink appeal to this narrative consistency for me as well), well it's something I would've 100% done differently if I thought of it. On one hand I love the skull I drew there, but otherwise it truly ruins the tangible aspect of this ordeal I like to depict and witness. In other words yeah it's an important aspect of the kink aspect in my work. But yeah it's not something I won't sleep over. Too late, I'll just do better next time. It's just, I know if others who enjoy it like me notice it, it'll bother them x)
Posted by Xenophage17 3 months ago Report
Well I know I certainly appreciate it despite any inconsistency. I guess it's one of those things that varies depending on style, different levels of realism and detail between moments. I do love how you drew the skull and the cartoony dump imagination at the end is a fantastic touch. Always appreciate the more naive and slightly goofy approach to preds.
Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report
Word.
Posted by Indighost 3 months ago Report
Beautiful! Love that big pile.
Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report
As it should be~