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Delayed Treat pg 28 By NochumiMaki -- Report

Page 28! 28 pages till the girl is finally in the stomach. But since I had time I thought I would quickly color them in for the achievement~ hope you like!

Its also not done yet! This comic(ish) helped me figure out how to do comic pages a bit better. (I dont exactly display it here because I sketched out the pages a lil while ago) so happy its almost done!

But I came up with a sorta sister comic, basically the sisters gonna have her time to shine as well. I have those pages sketched, and ready for me to work on as well. It isnt gonna be another 20+ pages comic(ish) thing though haha

Also the Pred is named Opal
Her girlfriend/ meal is Ci-ci

The sister is named Jade

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SigmaMare1337

Posted by SigmaMare1337 4 months ago Report

Happy new year

NochumiMaki

Posted by NochumiMaki 4 months ago Report

Happy new year^^

Zmanjedi

Posted by Zmanjedi 4 months ago Report

Is ci-ci going to be digested

This is amazing

NochumiMaki

Posted by NochumiMaki 4 months ago Report

Thats what happens to food~

qawsedkre

Posted by qawsedkre 4 months ago Report

Cici means tit in hungarian. Not sure if intentional.

NochumiMaki

Posted by NochumiMaki 4 months ago Report

It wasnt intentional but thats funny

Yurifan009

Posted by Yurifan009 4 months ago Report

yeah i'd say for perspective sake the hands on the prey from the pred should be done differently, they kinda just look like red hands right now instead of the surface area getting pushed in and onto the prey.

but this is so damn cute <3

NochumiMaki

Posted by NochumiMaki 4 months ago Report

Ill keep that in mind for the finalized version, I was just mainly excited on getting out some colors for the characters c:

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 4 months ago Report

It's kinda funny to realize we're 28 pages in and just now seeing what the characters really look like... they're even cuter in color!

Skulker

Posted by Skulker 3 months ago Report

I need to know now if this is going to end with the prey digested and her soul kept inside her predator who can feel her; of if it’s going to end with the predator saying her prey is part of her, even though she isn’t because everything that actually made her HER is dead and gone, there’s only mass from the meat she’d been inhabiting left.