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A man of about 36 years old, together with his wife, settles on a small island as a lighthouse keeper, the previous keeper had mysteriously disappeared, they also have a daughter of about 17 years old, who comes with them to help her parents settle into their new home, but soon after their arrival they meet a wonderful but at the same time terrible siren who really wants to "play" with them.
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This is probably the longest story I've ever written, it's about 9300 words, I hope there won't be too many grammatical errors here, English is not my native language after all.
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Posted by TheEvilWithin 3 months ago Report
The story for the most is good. Although Margaret predation feel like it got skipped as it goes from one moment her being next to Meryl and next she already got eaten.
Posted by Vovlang 3 months ago Report
Damn, I think I missed a paragraph there, thanks for the note,
Posted by Quarters 3 months ago Report
I loved the building dread and despair, my favorite aspect of vore!