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ALRIGHT- So I'll be honest- that was 2 months of failed drafts, before I realized how to fix the problems I was having with those drafts -Mostly coming down to every draft before this one didn't have a proper introduction to the central character for this arc- Honey, and the story lacking a character who's closely tied to the sexual theming of vore-
Which is what this scene does, among several other things
I finished this up about 5 days ago, I'm about 75% of the way through the next scene, but I'm flat broke. I didn't want to ask for support off of nothing, and at the end of the day I don't care about money beyond necessities... but I'm asking now out of said necessity-
If you have any questions about where I'm going from here I'll try and keep my answers as non-spoilery as possible- but I am interested in sharing the roadbumps that I ran into up till this point, for anyone looking to make something more narratively driven themselves. If I crash and burn I want to leave something that others can learn from, because I genuinely think this can work, it just takes a bit of extra effort since there's nothing to base off of.
Or if you see something yourself, I'm open to listening to how things feel. I know there'll be people who won't like it because not every scene is inherently erotic- and that's okay. I still want to be open to feedback because I'm learning as I go- But I have learned a lot already
If you happen to be able to help my perpetual charity case ass: https://www.patreon.com/c/user?u=25753910
If not hope you have a nice day anyways ;3
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Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report
ooh this sounds amazing. i love when people actually acknowledge the mental aspects of vore and how it affects people
Posted by RedInstead 2 months ago Report
Thank you :3
Yeah I wanted a story where I could have both pred AND prey characters matter within the story, and one of the ways I thought that would work is through the eyes of a remorseful pred-
For Honey it's a story of her grappling with this identity- and accepting that she's done things she hasn't liked to survive- Will she give into shame, or take her identity in a different direction? Look at things from a different perspective more befitting of her situation
..and hopefully that turns out super satisfying :3
Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report
that definitely sounds great ! i love looking at this concept too . ive done multiple posts about it too so i m absolutely rooting for you
Posted by Bruggetje 2 months ago Report
With money trouble just a stupid question but why dont you sell non sexual work like comics or anime strips cuz you work looks really good when finished comepletely.
I do woodwork as a living and when im in money trouble i usually find branches in the woods and make cool stuff from that to then sell from my home, maybe something to consider doing to keep money flowing in:)
Posted by RedInstead 2 months ago Report
Not a dumb question- I don't think
I guess what I'm hoping for is for the people who are interested in it help me complete this- that's why I'm adamant I want to hear people's feedback, I'd like for it to be something the community can give input on since it is something that takes a bit of an investment in the first place..
I think I'm afraid of leaning too hard into strictly monetizing this because it might take away from that aspect. Then it just becomes a commodity- It's kind of how I view art in general; that it's best when it's lead with the desire to make the best version of what you're making rather than the most profitable version
That being said it is hard to sell people on the premise just due to how much work it takes to get to that first 'big moment', like any other story... So I'm pushing a little harder than I really want to
Posted by RedInstead 2 months ago Report
Oh and as for nonsexual work I do have plans for things like that but that's outside of my work here... I just think this would be interesting and I'm trying this first
I've done a few odd jobs here and there from friends and family, and a few commercial commissions outside of this :P
Posted by Bruggetje 2 months ago Report
Yeah i wouldnt post non vore here as it is a vore website after all but indeed in spare time if you like it i would say do it. It can give you some money for other projects or for urself:)
Posted by PredatoryFood 2 months ago Report
I'm already pretty hooked, this emotional drive is a good one