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A Steamy Series of slip-ups By MultipleCacti -- Report

Hello all of my internet friends! Today I bring you an actual full length piece. And not just any, but one about cock vore, something I've only done once before in a commission. but this is a 100% Cacti original.

To be completely honest, this piece was not meant to be much longer than 2k, 2.5k words, but I just kept having good ideas while writing, and now it's a good 6k words long. Not the biggest I've ever made, but quite a bit bigger than the handful of shorts that this was meant to join. It came together mostly on a whim, so it's not very well thought through. If I were to have planned it out properly, I probably would have written a slightly different ending, but I think it's still good as is. I happy with it at least.

Tell me about all the things you think I did wrong, give me your opinions, like the video, subscribe, have a great week.

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doomfister

Posted by doomfister 2 months ago Report

This was a fun one, the sauna visual with the jizz hittng stones and instantly evaporating was fun. This sets up a possible side story with Lisa too, be fun to see her snarfed an literally no one bats an eye at a guy rocking a hell of a food baby XD

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MultipleCacti

Posted by MultipleCacti 2 months ago Report

hihi, did I summon you with the alliteration in the title? I'm glad you also enjoyed the evaporation thing, because I thought it was hot, but I can see it being a sort of weird turn off for people as well. Maybe I'll do a small story detailing what happens with Lisa and her unnamed captor as well.

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doomfister

Posted by doomfister 2 months ago Report

Alliteration is literally how you summon me, like a word play demon ;). Nice to see you have considered it, always fun to see a side character flesh out into fat on some lucky preds frame, looking forward to potentially seeing Lisa Liquidating XD

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