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Oh look, it's a pretty young thing, at the doctor's office with a stomachache. Think the doctor's going to examine her, up close? Maybe closer than he expects?
My take on a popular recurring trope...except the doctor is smart. But is he smart enough?
Posted by Indighost 2 months ago Report
Cute
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Posted by rugosian 2 months ago Report
Exactly what I was going for. :-) Thanks for the comment
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Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report
Where’s the thumbnail from ?
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Posted by rugosian 2 months ago Report
I've been making them on Midjourney. I'd like to work something out with an artist, but my first attempt at connecting to commission such went nowhere. I haven't had time to try again.
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Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report
Poor doctor, victim of an evil lady XD
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Posted by randomuser13579 2 months ago Report
Reading a story with smart prey feels so rare ,I was happy someone wasn’t falling for the usual tropes.Still I was kinda hoping for a different ending but I read the tags I knew how it was going to end.
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Posted by rugosian 2 months ago Report
Kinda tough to write a mystery and also advertise with a thorough taxonomy. Maybe I will do some where the prey wins, but if tagged accurately, would anyone read it?
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Posted by randomuser13579 2 months ago Report
I mean just because the prey won doesn't mean no one gets eaten because if she came to a hospital for easy prey and became easy prey herself.
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Posted by mec59l 2 months ago Report
I'd like an alternate ending with the doctor surviving but covering the girl's tracks by doing scientifical tests on her such as "how many people she could eat in one go".
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Posted by rugosian 2 months ago Report
I've actually been kicking around scenarios in the back of my mind for a good "government weapons lab researches captive pred, bites off more than they can chew" story. Nothing has gelled yet, but you'll see it here when it does.
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Posted by mec59l 1 month ago Report
I'll look forward to it then
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