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What do you get when you combine a sadistic teacher and a very bad dad? A very unfortunate situation for a tiny student.
Hey there! Thanks for reading my first story! I had been thinking about this idea for a long time and I finally got around to writing it down and opening a gallery to put online. I think it might be a little derivative and it was difficult to get the scenes I wanted while keeping the characters semi-believable but I thought it was a fun challenge and pretty good attempt for my first attempt at erotic fiction.
This story deals with fatality and cruel preds so if that's not your thing read no further.
Any resemblance to real life people, locations, or businesses is completely coincidental
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Posted by TinyHunter 4 weeks ago Report
This was good stuff, especially for a first outing! Exactly the kind of pred/prey situation I like, and well written and concise too!
I thought the dad character was a little harsh lol, but I suppose there are people like that out there...but goddamn Will, you barely hesitated!
To bad for Peyton her mom didn't take her with her...
Posted by urbanfunkraider 4 weeks ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! I do feel like I pushed how cruel a vore scenario could be without feeling completely unmotivated to the absolute limit here lol.
I like my scenarios to be as unforgiving and mean spirited as possible. There's definitely correlation between how little the prey deserves what they get and how enticing I find it.
In this setting I like to think that shrunken people have an effect on big people that they pretty much can't help themselves once the idea of vore is put in their heads, so if Peyton went with her mom it would probably still just be a matter of time before her date with the sewers haha
Posted by Kelly 3 weeks ago Report
Fatality and cruel preds are my bread and butter. Its the real good stuff
Posted by urbanfunkraider 3 weeks ago Report
You'll want to keep an eye on my page then :P
Posted by LazySWV 11 days ago Report
Fantastic to see another talented f/f macro/micro writer on the scene! I saw your post on 8chan and look foward to reading everything, present and future :)
Posted by urbanfunkraider 8 days ago Report
Thanks! I'm excited to entertain you :)