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Whoah, two uploads in one day.
It occurred to me that in my excitement to get the last scene finished and upload the story, I totally forgot to include a pretty important scene towards the end. So here you go, a revised version with a new scene that both closes up a pretty glaring loose end and adds a nice bit of extra flavour to the story.
By the way, I've got a couple of ideas for a follow-up to this story. The first one is a bite-sized midquel that shows what Taylor was up to and why she took so long in the shower. The second is a longer sequel that features Taylor now the subject of rumours at school that she caused the twins' disappearance. These ideas can't mutually exist so sound off in the comments which sounds more appealing.
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Posted by Kelly 2 weeks ago Report
Yooo this story slapped. Very casual, devilish and a nice twist in it being twins which I couldnt tell from the title. High quality work!
Posted by urbanfunkraider 2 weeks ago Report
I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by Kelly 2 weeks ago Report
Both sequel ideas sound fun and cant wait to see what you cook up next
Posted by urbanfunkraider 2 weeks ago Report
You'll find out soon hopefully!
Posted by muslone 2 weeks ago Report
This is a great story and the twist of Taylor being the subject of the rumors sounds intriguing. I'm always interested in longer versions of a story arc and love the world building aspect of stories. Looking forward to what scenario you create.
Posted by urbanfunkraider 2 weeks ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! I doubt I'm going to do anything serialized or novistic in format but my plan is to utilize this town and people in it to create an episodic format loaded with characters who will keep popping up when a story suits them, I think it's going to be really satisfying to see the town populate with people and places that can develop in new ways as I continue to write
Posted by AllieNoms 2 weeks ago Report
That was a great story. Honestly I think a sequel where Taylor is thought to be the reason the twins disappeared would be amazing. I'm curious how the story will go.
Posted by urbanfunkraider 2 weeks ago Report
Thanks, that's what I'm leaning towards. I'm just brainstorming how I'm going to fit the scenes I want to do together
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 7 days ago Report
This was so great! Hope to see more giantess vore/scat stories from you. F/F shrinking prey-Giantess pred dynamic’s got something special in it for sure!