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P.A.L.D.E.A. Ch 24: Supporting Women’s Wrongs By Fatedmeal -- Report

Summary: Lillie is in trouble. Juliana is in trouble. Penny is in trouble. The three students are on a field trip to Porto Marinada for an ecology group assignment. However, some of them might be getting to know each other more intimately than they expected.

Word Count: 22,807 words

Author’s Notes: Something a bit more personal and smaller scaled then the last chapter. This chapter also wasn’t intended to be this long…but I realized that I needed to add some more stuff to this specific chapter. To set up events that would happen in the remainder of the 3rd P.A.L.D.E.A. season. Anyway…I hope that you enjoyed all the character moments, the plot moments, and vore scenes in this chapter.

Also…who do you think dunnit? Please let me know, only if you want to, and make sure to comment down below if you have anything you want to say about this chapter. Your comments help me thrive!

Character References:
1. Right click on link and press open link in new tab.
2. Copy the link and paste it onto a new tab.
3. Don’t know what to tell you, you have to type in the character’s name and franchise in the search bar and find the image yourself.
Lillie: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Lillie#/media/File%3AUSUM_Lillie.png
Lusamine: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Lusamine#/media/File%3ASun_Moon_Lusamine.png
Miriam: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Miriam#/media/File%3ALCR_Miriam_icon_large.png
Penny: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Penny#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Penny.png
Juliana: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Juliana_(game)#/media/File%3AScarlet_Juliana.png
Eri: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Eri#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Eri.png
Atticus: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Atticus#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Atticus.png
Tyme: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Tyme#/media/File%3ALCR_Tyme_icon_large.png
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Hex Maniac (ZA): https://www.reddit.com/r/TopCharacterDesigns/s/KMw45Homej
N: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/N#/media/File%3ABlack_2_White_2_N.png
Arven: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Arven#/media/File%3AViolet_Arven.png
Emma: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Emma#/media/File%3AEmma_PG.png

Thumbnail Reference: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/94883830

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amerdism

Posted by amerdism 2 weeks ago Report

Wish you did more size content and transformation, good chapter either way

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 weeks ago Report

Same. Unfortunately, time has been escaping me and preventing me from writing more stories. I’ll see what I can do about that in the future.

coolblooded

Posted by coolblooded 2 weeks ago Report

=.= *.* ^.^ wow.great chap. ^.^ ^~^

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 weeks ago Report

Thanks a lot for the comment. I’m glad you liked the chapter.

Azoon

Posted by Azoon 13 days ago Report

I typed most of this up on discord when you mentioned the site metrics but missed my opportunity to post it, so i'll just leave it here:

i have no idea what the overarching plot is, i dont know what a good chunk of the characters are supposed to be like in the game, i have no idea about paldea as a setting, but none of that matters because the moment to moment scenes/interactions are really good, and the prose is detailed + engaging

i always think i'm not going to care about the next part due to lack of interest in the franchise but i've been proven wrong repeatedly, you are cooking something really special with this series and i'll keep following it

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 10 days ago Report

Thanks for taking the time to collect your thoughts and type them out.

I really appreciate that the smaller moments that I spend time on are able to keep the attention of readers like you, who have less knowledge about the series but are along for the ride to see where the story is heading.

I will say that the overarching plot has already significantly deviated from what happened in the game by this point, and I say this while discounting the vore. So I think that you aren’t alone in being a little in the dark of where I’m heading with this series.

;-)

SSV

Posted by SSV 8 days ago Report

I realized that when you killed off Giacomo. I was a bit confused since he shows up near the end of the game.

SSV

Posted by SSV 8 days ago Report

Juliana does bring up a really good point. when something is too good to be true, it probably is. There' so many ways the the reformation project can and probably will fail. I have this feeling that they would even sacrifice Florian to bring this plan to reality. What's one life for millions.

By the way this is going, seems like this is goodbye for Tyme. Shame really. I liked her in the game. So it seems like N is apart of LAMENT. Does he know what they're planning or he has his own plans.

Forgot to mention. This is N after he left his Castle, right? Or things happen between then and now. I also love you added Juliana thinking she did a good job keeping Nemona and florian apart. haha...she's in for a surprised.

It's looking like LAMENT is setting up to be the next big evil group like team rocket and Galactic.

Anyways another great chapter! I'll be waiting for the next with bated breath.