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Eight friends go on a lovely holiday to the beach! I wanted to play with some more complex character stuff, and what better way to do that than to throw a whole heap of them into one place?
Will Sarah ever get to step out of her sister's shadow? Will Justin ever get over his weird pred virginity? Will any of the girls even survive?
There's only one way to find out!
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Posted by Randomdude5 2 weeks ago Report
I am always happy to see a new story from you, and get excited to read it. There is a lot of potential for vore to happen here. If you need more girls to get eaten, there could always be some other tourists that aren't in the group.
I'm really hoping that Justin gets to eat one of the girls and lose his pred virginity. As for who he would eat; Sarah is too annoying, but either Grace or Bianca might be good for his first girl.
I think that this is a great prologue, and I am really excited for this series. You did a great job.