Posted by Bod67 2 weeks ago Report

Very enjoyable, can't wait for more

Posted by Randomdude5 2 weeks ago Report

The way people keep pretending Sarah is younger than she is makes me think that they are doing it just to annoy her.
Sarah has a point about doubting Nathan's word when he says that Jessica wanted to be eaten. Since Jessica is digested, she can't confirm or deny Nathan's story. If another girl in the group is willing to be eaten by a guy in the group, she should tell her friends, so there isn't any doubt. Of course they could just watch too.

I think that either Grace or Sarah will get digested next. The reason why I think Grace might get digested next is because she seems to have the most positive opinion about vore out of the 4 remaining girls, and she wears a bikini that makes her look the most appetizing. Sarah is in shock and grief about Jessica's digestion, and doesn't see the point of going on without her, so Sarah might jump down a throat.

Posted by BunnyboiCaleb 2 weeks ago Report

Jessica just sliding out like a bar of soap feels so fitting! Easy on the way in, easy on the way out!

Posted by Randomdude5 6 days ago Report

In this story https://aryion.com/g4/view/1063676 Dr David Herman's research showed that Thicc, curvy girls make smoother dumps than, thinner, more athletic girls do. I like PinkJazz's consistency with that detail.

Posted by RDRW 12 days ago Report

Poor Sarah. Losing your best friend is tough. But does she see no meaning in live anymore and just feds herself to the next best predator? Or does she stay away from any hungry maws? She didn't seem that much into being food before.

It seemed weird at first that Jessica didn't say anything, but - assuming Nathan's story is true - it also would make sense. Sarah would do everything in her might to talk her out of it. But Jessica was blushing when the others were talking about "testing the toilet". She might have been indeed more into it than it seemed at first.

As for who is next. It could be anyone except Holly. She doesn't seem very eager to become food either. Maybe there is actually a thing the two sisters have in common.

Posted by predlucyforhire 10 days ago Report

I 100% agree that it's strange.
But I had forgotten about her blushing about the toilet.

The way he describes her is so forward though!
It's hard to believe.

Posted by RDRW 9 days ago Report

Yeah, the big question here is: did he tell the truth. Maybe he did. There are hints that she was into it. Maybe she ran into him that night and spontaneously said 'fuck it, let's get me pulped right now'. And his story was surprisingly detailed if it was randomly made up.
Then again, would Jessica really just leave Sarah behind like that? She must have known how much that would hit her. And she did make plans for the week. Was that really just for hiding her true plans? It really does feel off...

Posted by PinkJazz 9 days ago Report

Y'know I really didn't think I'd have people theorycrafting over Jessica's level of enthusiasm XD

I suppose you'll have to wait and see if I dig into it anymore in the coming chapters! For now I'll leave it up to you guys to decide what you think really happened <3

Posted by predlucyforhire 7 days ago Report

You did say you wanted these stories to be more character focused.
(Unlike your other stories which definitely weren't character focused in the slightest. {Sarcasm})

And then we watched a shy geek with dreams of the future. Shamelessly begging to be pulped moments later. From a secondary source.
And a source that has already proven to be untrustworthy.

Just saying.
You did set up the question quite well.

Posted by predlucyforhire 10 days ago Report

I'm generally all for willing prey.
But if a preference for unwilling.
But someone begging to be pulped?
(I love seeing another person using that word, it's not seen enough)
That is incredibly hot.

But in this case I don't think she was willing.
The last we saw of her she was daydreaming about the future. Then her plan was to go piss them think about the future more.
His description of how she acted was off too.
She was too forward.
In the first part (zero-eth part?) she was too nervous to just stand in a room while others she didn't know talked.
And then there's the fact that he had his eye on her on a number of occasions.

Lastly. I think he sat on her face and in her desperation to escape she bit his ass.

She could have been willing.
But somehow I don't think she was.

In a world where a woman can get churned into shit and bones so casually though? There is both no evidence of her not wanting this and no one (with an authority) would care if she hadn't.



(Also just a very brief sidenote. If men were digesting women that frequently, then the ratio of them to us must be incredibly large for humanity to still be around. I know you said in the past you don't think about those details too hard. But honestly the idea of them being rare enough would make a lot of your stories make a lot of sense. "Why would she date a guy who shat out so many of her friends?" "There aren't many other guys and she's straight" I don't know. I love the vibes of your stories. They are so good.)