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So, this part is a little short by what I normally try to post, but it was the closest stopping point that, didn't feel it would require re-reading this story when the next comes out. So, hopefully that'll be a good size and satisfying.
Daniel, is a dragon at the end of the day. He's determined, he's possessive, and will pull together all he can, to get what he wants.
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Posted by Kasra 2 days ago Report
MONSTER SQUAD, ASSEMBLE!
It's good seeing everything coming together. A lot of characters introduced, their characteristics used, and the amusing image of Daniel just carrying Ezzie off.
On another note, I like that comment about "taking what is mine" against preferring the option he thinks Cory would be happier with. It's a balance of classic draconic possessiveness and an emotional bond.