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Fiona's Poolside Predicament By TheShiningAegis -- Report

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My first story. Let me know what you think!

EDIT: Re-uploaded with paragraph and grammar fixes.

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Posted by NonNecessarium 3 days ago Report

Promising stuff!

Posted by SentheWanderer 3 days ago Report

Not bad for a first story. I do like how descriptive you are on some things. One thing I personally recommend is to separate the paragraphs a little more so that its easier to read and less harsh on the eyes. Other than that congrats on getting your first story posted!

Posted by TheShiningAegis 3 days ago Report

Thanks for catching that, wasn't expecting the paragraphs to get squished together during the upload. Should be fixed now.

Posted by SentheWanderer 3 days ago Report

No worries, that's a lesson I had to learn the hard way as well. Hope to see more from ya!