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In the last Chapter our heroines meet up and join with Faith the Cheetah girl as they fight agaisnt a Crimoson blood plant. In this chapter they arrive in Cadon but they will not get the welcome they are expecting...(There is alot of vore toward the end, rather some disturbing vore depending how strong your mind is or how you picture it but in the end its still alot and its rather gross in some aspects of detail just to warn you.) Also plz leave comments telling me what you like, didn't like what you would like to see more of and you know...Enjoy!
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Posted by Terris 17 years ago Report
Hi! I enjoyed reading this, and since you asked for comments, I'll make one which may or may not be helpful. You really should do some copy-editing before you post your stories or run it by someone who can edit it for you. You've got a lot of grammatic issues int here that suggest you were in a rush. It would be a better read if they were polished out. Thanks for sharing!