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New Microsoft Word Document By Sereno_Orenov -- Report

Uploaded: 17 years ago

Views: 875

File size: 184.00 KiB

MIME Type: application/msword

Comments: 1

Favorites: 0

Tags: Non-Vore

This story is an action, pirate thingy that was inspired by the pirate craze that seems to be taking place. I'm not done with it, but here is the first seven chapters.

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Posted by Omega 17 years ago Report

Quite long and well set up with alot of things going on from start to finish. Good interaction between characters though sometimes the dialogue seemed a bit stilted and wooden. Story could also use a little bit more character and location descriptions so readers have a good image of who they are reading about, clothing, hair, eyes, markings, and myriad little things help bring a character to life. Though what's presented is ok as is.