Hey this is battlefrontmaniac, real-name Andrew, saying nice job and keep up the good work. ^-^ I was thinking of another story that starts out the same only a female teen Sangheili meets the one and only Legendary Master Chief in the second mission of Halo 1. She gets off the dropship, activates her camouflage, then heads in the opposite direction. When she hides in an area behind a tree, the Chief sees her through the scope of the sniper rifle. He puts his finger on the trigger but doesn't shoot. He sees her beauty and elegant, slim body, not to mention the huge breasts. Instead he creeps over behind her and says:
"You know, you shouldn't stand in a spot where the enemy might see you"
He then touches a part of her where the camouflage turns off. She turns around in suprise and begins to fall, dropping her weapon. The Chief quickly moves forward and catches her before she hits the ground. She closes her eyes and shakes in fear, thinking that her end was beginning.
Chief: "Don't worry, I won't hurt you. Why would I hurt such a beautiful and delicate Sangheili?"
She suddenly opens her eyes and looks into his helmet, amazed at the kindness he showed.
Ok you think of the rest, I thought of this and 3:46 in the morning so it should be not problem for you. ^-^ Have a good one.
And if you need any help on the rest of the story just email me at [email protected]
You can't just write part of a story and expect another person to do your dirty work! Try thinking of the ending yourself, you might actually do good on it.
Posted by battlefrontmaniac 16 years ago Report
Hey this is battlefrontmaniac, real-name Andrew, saying nice job and keep up the good work. ^-^ I was thinking of another story that starts out the same only a female teen Sangheili meets the one and only Legendary Master Chief in the second mission of Halo 1. She gets off the dropship, activates her camouflage, then heads in the opposite direction. When she hides in an area behind a tree, the Chief sees her through the scope of the sniper rifle. He puts his finger on the trigger but doesn't shoot. He sees her beauty and elegant, slim body, not to mention the huge breasts. Instead he creeps over behind her and says:
"You know, you shouldn't stand in a spot where the enemy might see you"
He then touches a part of her where the camouflage turns off. She turns around in suprise and begins to fall, dropping her weapon. The Chief quickly moves forward and catches her before she hits the ground. She closes her eyes and shakes in fear, thinking that her end was beginning.
Chief: "Don't worry, I won't hurt you. Why would I hurt such a beautiful and delicate Sangheili?"
She suddenly opens her eyes and looks into his helmet, amazed at the kindness he showed.
Ok you think of the rest, I thought of this and 3:46 in the morning so it should be not problem for you. ^-^ Have a good one.
And if you need any help on the rest of the story just email me at
[email protected]
Posted by Assassinmaster62 15 years ago Report
You can't just write part of a story and expect another person to do your dirty work! Try thinking of the ending yourself, you might actually do good on it.