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Auntie Ant Adventure By Lucky -- Report

Uploaded: 17 years ago

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The Sneaky Game! A childhood recounting. *WARNING: Full-digestion, SCAT*

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komaru

Posted by komaru 17 years ago Report

I love stories like thiis, great job lucky^_^

Solstice

Posted by Solstice 17 years ago Report

Remember kids, always plan ahead and remember to have a backup plan ;).

AwillingMouse

Posted by AwillingMouse 17 years ago Report

Awesome story Lucky!

Pharo

Posted by Pharo 16 years ago Report

yes, very good indeed. :)

Darkseid

Posted by Darkseid 16 years ago Report

Needs work and there are some grammar mistakes.

I know the focus of your story is being digested. You haven't really thought out what human stomach acid is like, have you? It figures. No, just that people here assume things that aren't true and especially without any proof. Simply not that stomach acid's acidity is no different than stomach acid and before you start talking about HCl, do know that it isn't that strong in low levels of concentration and it is not a super acid or an acid with incredible corrosive capabilities. That would be Sulfuric Acid. I just find it strange how people assume that Hydrochloric Acid, which is a strong acid is as strong or stronger than Sulfuric Acid. The level of corrosive-ness in acid is simply determined by it being a strong or weak acid, how many protons does it donate when dissolving into an aqueous mixture and how much of it is concentrated by molar volume.

I don't want to crush your dreams or anything, but you must know that human stomach acid is extremely weak. It is clearly detailed by the lack of digestion that takes place and how much one has to eat to actual absorb nutrients.

So I would have done this story differently if I were you.

Lucky

Posted by Lucky 16 years ago Report

Whoa, dude, I was like, nine when I came up with this idea. Cut me some slack. ^ ^;

Redatheart

Posted by Redatheart 16 years ago Report

Garth is a tad creepy

Lucky

Posted by Lucky 16 years ago Report

So am I. *Shrug*
Guess that's what made us such close friends. ; p

Redatheart

Posted by Redatheart 16 years ago Report

lol

kidclef

Posted by kidclef 14 years ago Report

Darkseid u r such a killjoy. This story is awesome u dont hafta get all "technical" about it

Lucky

Posted by Lucky 11 years ago Report

Hey, I'm really glad you liked the story. : 3

Hopefully you had as much fun with it as I did.

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report

Wow, this was pretty good.

Lucky

Posted by Lucky 11 years ago Report

Thanks buddy! I'm glad you liked it.

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report

I was a little late to the party :) It just goes to show there is a lot of excellent stuff at Eka's that is buried under the sands of time.

Lucky

Posted by Lucky 11 years ago Report

How true! Lookin' through people's galleries is one of my favorite things to do. : 3

jizzerman

Posted by jizzerman 10 years ago Report

Loved it

Lucky

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

I'm so glad! It's always cool to run into someone else like-minded. : 3

jizzerman

Posted by jizzerman 10 years ago Report

Loved it