I posted a detailed comment in the forums but I'll also leave one here. Yay hard vore! Part of it might have been a little over the top, but the overall effect is hot. :)
I love this, very much. So hard to see underaged vore, nonetheless hardvore.
My only iffies about the story were the sex scenes... but that's a more personal taste on my part.
My favorite scene being the one where the mother gently 'puts down' her own cub. Touching, and it gave me just the right feeling... a feeling that's very hard to describe.
I love a good revenge story, and the ending here satisfied me...mostly. I'm going to imagine that Safi will kill them all off eventually. She seems more than clever enough to avenge her mate and cubs thoroughly and find a way to survive the loss of her pride as well!
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Posted by pendingdelete023gb4239852 18 years ago Report
I posted a detailed comment in the forums but I'll also leave one here. Yay hard vore! Part of it might have been a little over the top, but the overall effect is hot. :)
Posted by Randomness 18 years ago Report
I love this, very much. So hard to see underaged vore, nonetheless hardvore.
My only iffies about the story were the sex scenes... but that's a more personal taste on my part.
My favorite scene being the one where the mother gently 'puts down' her own cub. Touching, and it gave me just the right feeling... a feeling that's very hard to describe.
Beautiful, nonetheless.
Posted by blergle 15 years ago Report
I love a good revenge story, and the ending here satisfied me...mostly. I'm going to imagine that Safi will kill them all off eventually. She seems more than clever enough to avenge her mate and cubs thoroughly and find a way to survive the loss of her pride as well!
Posted by BBthewolf 10 years ago Report
Very nice love the ending!
Posted by HEISINLOVEWITHROVE 1 year ago Report
cutie love the ending