Expand Add to favorites | Full Size | Download The Lord's Daughter By magresco -- Report The Lord's Daughter takes a bit of time to get acquainted with the new servant girl.
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Posted by Yrrsa 18 years ago Report
I like it!
Posted by Ragtime 18 years ago Report
There story was very good, although you used the conditional tense rather oddly in some places. For a story like this, I would suggest sticking to the past tense, or at the very least, the present.
Posted by magresco 18 years ago Report
I'll past your tense!::Fist shake::
In all seriousness though, thanks for the tip.