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The Lord's Daughter By magresco -- Report

Uploaded: 16 years ago

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The Lord's Daughter takes a bit of time to get acquainted with the new servant girl.

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Yrrsa

Posted by Yrrsa 16 years ago Report

I like it!

Ragtime

Posted by Ragtime 16 years ago Report

There story was very good, although you used the conditional tense rather oddly in some places. For a story like this, I would suggest sticking to the past tense, or at the very least, the present.

magresco

Posted by magresco 16 years ago Report

I'll past your tense!::Fist shake::
In all seriousness though, thanks for the tip.