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It seems like a normal day in the Mushroom Kingdom. But something weird happens to Peach after she eats a strange mushroom. What will happen?
Contains; F/m, soft vore, and implied Soft vore
May write a sequel if enough people like it.
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Posted by AtmosRobot 16 years ago Report
Pretty good.
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thanks.
Posted by Twisty22 16 years ago Report
I think I'm the only person who thinks Peach would make a great prey.
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Not really, I think she would too, but that's not how I wanted the story to go.
Posted by Slash 16 years ago Report
....Three words: Keep it up!
I really lke this idea and you put some effort into this. I don't think it's quite over yet. A certain green shirted mario counter part is still out there.^^
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Ah yes, Luigi. What to do with him? I can only imagine (literally) the fate of our green shirted hero, and how he could meet his end. But will it be Peach who does him in, or perhaps someone else...
Posted by Tsavo 16 years ago Report
Peach as pred?!? Win sauce. Love the dialogue and descriptions too. Would love to see more.
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
I just might make more.
Posted by Requiem 16 years ago Report
Hm...the descriptive paragraphs were nice, though some of the dialogue seemed a bit off. I'm not exactly sure why. Not bad overall, though!
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thank you very much. Yeah, I sometimes have dialogue issues, but I am trying to get better at it. It's not easy thinking up what to say. :P
Posted by Requiem 16 years ago Report
Something I'm familiar with.
Posted by MichaelGrey 15 years ago Report
Ah-hem. Allow me to respond to this series as a whole...
IN SOOOONG!
No one mourns the Wicked!
No one cries "They won't return!"
No one lays a lily on their grave
The good man scorns the Wicked!
Through their lives, our children learn
What we miss, when we misbehave:
And Goodness knows
The Wicked's lives are lonely
Goodness knows
The Wicked die alone
It just shows when you're Wicked
You're left only
On your own
Yes, Goodness knows
The Wicked's lives are lonely
Goodness knows
The Wicked cry alone
Nothing grows for the Wicked
They reap only
What they've sown!
Posted by BerserkerB 15 years ago Report
Ah, good song. Good play.
Posted by MichaelGrey 15 years ago Report
...yeah. Indeed.