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 Luvdisc Fever
 Spiritomb wasted no time in attacking us. He charged and used Outrage, barely missing my head with the flames that flew towards us. I retaliated with a quick Aura Sphere, blocking any hits from the next barrage. I then quickly traced the aura of all the combatants, and realized something. Spiritomb had based himself inside of Rayquaza's head, but most of him was in the neck area of the Legend. I was getting worn out already, as I was not used to being unable to fly, and was still short of breath. I could tell everyone else wasn't fairing any better. Suddenly, Rayquaza was in control for a short while, and pleaded with Jake to remove Spiritomb from his body. Suddenly, Spiritomb changed colors, his eyes going red and snakelike body turning a cerulean blue. I knew what was coming, but I couldn't have prepared for it.
 Meteors where headed toward the top of the tower, and with the short time spent in the atmosphere, there was very little size reduction done to them. I knew now that I could quite possibly be the only one of us to survive this onslaught, but by myself, I couldn't do much. Eric was hit in the middle of Luster Purge, and was knocked out against one of the rocks that littered the roof. Jake's dad came in from behind, and Spiritomb was destracted. I saw my chance, and got ready for a Force Palm. "Good Night, Spritomb." Just then, Jake yelled loudly, "Jump on his back!" He broke my concentration, but I set up to put this new plan into action. "You better know what your doing!" I jumped onto Spiritomb's head, holding onto the spikes he had on the top. Spiritomb began to flail, as well as pervade my thoughts. (This is foolish. You reall think you can escape me and my master?) (Your master,) I replied using my amulet to grant me psychic ability. (Fared no better than you will. He is now dead.) (How do you know? My
 master is a ghost. Do you really think he would be killed by a mere phsyical onslaught? You'd be mistaken. Whether you are killed or eaten, you will die.) I had almost fallen off twice now. Once when I was told Giratina was still alive, and second by the fact that Spiritomb wanted me to die as prey. My vision swam, and just before Jake was about to hit his head, I fell. Spiritomb lowered in a flash, his mouth open. I took my opprotunity, and grabbed onto his headspikes again, flipping myself into a riding position.
 The meteors were still raining down, and damaging the tower. I looked down, and was completely enthralled with the fact that I could see down to the second story. Everyone had seemed to notice it too, for they were still. Before my eyes, I saw the aura of Spiritomb leave Rayquaza, and float away from the top of the tower. Someone warned everyone to be still, but I couldn't hang on. At the exact point that a bird landed on the roof, I hit the top of the tower, and it started to crumble. I jumped off, a good 35 foot drop, to the ocean. I started to sink, but willed myself to the top and dashed off with all the speed I could muster. I reached a small island just seconds after all the others arrived. After the tower had crumbled, I wondered how long it would take to be rebuilt. After Jake, Eric, Rayquaza, and Jake's dad had a nice long talk, Jake's dad gestured to me, and Jake told him my name. "Nate? The Charizard from Cinnabar?" "Shiny Charizard," I pointed out. "Yes, your parents told me about you."
 I was a bit suprised, and replied. "Really? You know my parents?" "Of course! Chris and Brandy surveyed the land around the island in search of criminals for the police. In return, a law was mad that they were not to be captured. If they were, the captor would receive life in prison, with a few other punishments. I joined them when the got lost onece. We became the best of friends." I finally understood their overprotected tendencies when it came to my childhood. "I never would have thought..." I went into a deep thought process, trying to picture my parents as honorary police officers. I laughed on the inside, and waited for us to leave. Jake picked me up, unnecessary after all, and put me on his back. Jake was pretty absent-minded on the way there. He seemed to be thinking, and I didn't interrupt. He started to lose altitude, so I signalled Jakes dad and Rayquaza to come catch him before he fell. As they got around me and made it halfway down Jake's side, he passed out. He fell into the ocean.
 I immediately used my aura powers to watch him. He drifted downward, and looked to land on another pokemon. Around the surface, I could also see several Luvdiscs, all looking at me. According to the legends, seeing a Luvdisc meant love in the near future. I told Jake's dad and Rayquaza to let me go at the count of three, and then wait at the spot where Jake fell, so they could get him when he came up. At three, they dropped me, and I returned to my rightful self. I flew back to Mt. Moon, a very long trip, and was suprised to see Kyorui, Frank, Falco, Guy and Eric there. I asked why they were there, especially when two had told me they would be headed home. They told me they couldn't leave, as they had become too attached to this place. I was okay with it, and gave them all a hug before telling them what happened. They said they had a pretty uneventful time, though a Female Charmeleon had shown up at the cave not long ago looking for me. I was just about to ask what she wanted, when the same Female Charmeleon, now a Charizard, appeared in the doorway. "You could just ask me yourself." She told me, and came over to me.
 She sized me up, as one does when looking at a potential mate, and licked the side of my face. I blushed, but before I could talk to her any further, Jake's Dad appeared outside of the cave. "Nate, come on! Jake's in grave danger!" Without a word, I took off. About two miles from the place where Jake had fallen, we saw a Water Spout. "That's the problem, Nate." Jake's father responded, answering the question forming in my mind. "That Kyogre has captured Jake!
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We battle and defeat Spiritomb, and I finally return to my rightful form. I also return to Mt. Moon to find a surprise. However, it is cut short by one thing: The fact that Jake is a captive!

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Posted by Charizardcowman 16 years ago Report

alright...The tower needs re-built, and whoever the female Charizard is followed me!