This is very, very good! Short, but its length is perfectly suited to the story. I really like your writing style. The idea of the daydream, and its specific setting, is interesting. And the vore is good, too! In other words, I can have nothing but praise for your work. Very well done indeed!
Or at least I'm not used to seeing this level of quality writing tied into vore. The encounter itself is very believable; I'm not sure whether this actually happened or not because of the details that you've so naturally included into the story. Sure, the woman is a little bit over the top, but it's not like there aren't women like that out there. It even compliments the active imagination of the speaker in the story; because this is told first-person, maybe the description is a bit biased.
Anyway, enough of my ramblings, that ending was superb. A concise, emotional one-liner that tied everything back in to the start. Beautiful work!
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
This is very, very good! Short, but its length is perfectly suited to the story. I really like your writing style. The idea of the daydream, and its specific setting, is interesting. And the vore is good, too! In other words, I can have nothing but praise for your work. Very well done indeed!
Posted by Lucky 14 years ago Report
My goodness, this is a brilliant piece of work!
Or at least I'm not used to seeing this level of quality writing tied into vore. The encounter itself is very believable; I'm not sure whether this actually happened or not because of the details that you've so naturally included into the story. Sure, the woman is a little bit over the top, but it's not like there aren't women like that out there. It even compliments the active imagination of the speaker in the story; because this is told first-person, maybe the description is a bit biased.
Anyway, enough of my ramblings, that ending was superb. A concise, emotional one-liner that tied everything back in to the start. Beautiful work!
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
Very nicely written :)
Posted by empatheticapathy 12 years ago Report
I really like this. My only complaint is that it didn't happen.