Sorry it's been a while. I have been so busy with school, but now that I am on winter break, I thought i would write a new story! Also, I took a creative writing class this semester so I hoped it helped me improve my writing. You be the judge!
Very well, written, though I was kinda hoping for an unbirth/age regression/pregnancy/making him healthy/her his mother. Hehe, I got tongue tied typing this. 5/5
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Posted by Fidel2323 17 years ago Report
oh yeah^^ you are better :D thx for writing and uploading^^
Posted by eatmeup 17 years ago Report
Wow what a lucky kid. Glad to see you are back. Enjoyed it.
Posted by Cameilla 17 years ago Report
I am glad you guys liked it! Here is the sound file I made, download it if you want to!
http://rapidshare.com/files/175021625/Last_Request_Story.mp3.html
Posted by chinyucherng 17 years ago Report
Great story I would like to have the audio version....can you re-post it?or send it to my email...?
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Posted by Pharo 17 years ago Report
very nice. keep up the good work.
Posted by DarkTau 17 years ago Report
Very well, written, though I was kinda hoping for an unbirth/age regression/pregnancy/making him healthy/her his mother. Hehe, I got tongue tied typing this. 5/5
Posted by Deleteduser_120 17 years ago Report
My apologies for having read it so late after receiving the Watch notification, but your story was very well-written. Nice one.
Posted by kamalan 17 years ago Report
It is interesting to read your story..Pl. visit my blog and leave your comment on my first little story- a highly sensual absorption story..
Posted by luckyB 11 years ago Report
Great story!