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A short story inspired by a dream. A woman seeks to undo the curse placed upon her with the help of her closest friend.
Contains scat, bestiality, and f/m vore. *Edited by Carnoustie*
Posted by Carnoustie 16 years ago Report
I helped with this! n.n
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Posted by Shriven 16 years ago Report
Vore and romance ftw :)
Nice story!
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Posted by trh7323 16 years ago Report
Great story! Well written and interesting.
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Posted by Gelus 16 years ago Report
Hmmm... it's odd to see a f/m story where the main male lead doesnt end up being the one who gets eaten. I rather enjoyed both the premise and the execution of this.
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Posted by Gelus 16 years ago Report
... speaking of eaten, half that post didnt make it through the series of tubes XD between eaten and the period it was supposed to say ", and the female lead's attitude toward him was refreshingly different as well"
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Posted by delet359hs56h2 16 years ago Report
I liked the story and it was a good approach. I sensed a little exhibition in there as well; making love in an alley while the world was busy out in the street. I personally am rather fond of females who in the casual approach to their male counterparts are more dominant but also can be tender in close moments as you exposed. Very very nice read!
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Posted by Kusanagi 16 years ago Report
Very nice read, a solid change of pace from the pred casually eating the one they supposedly care for.
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Posted by Fidel2323 16 years ago Report
good story^^
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Posted by Sirrush 16 years ago Report
I thought this was a good story, though a little disappointed with the ending. The digestion of the muggers was just too unbelievably fast.
I think this would have been more entertaining if she had to remain in her snake form until the men were realistically digested, which would have taken several days.
I could see her hiding in the dumster, or maybe he gets a big van for her to crawl in to be taken home.
And then the problem of disposing of so much waste where it wouldn't be noticed. It would be a disgusting, but necessary operation to break the enoromous turn apart and flush it bit by bit down the toilet. Even the bones would be dissolved, though the clothes wouldn't digest well, nor could be flushed, so would probably have to be washed and then thrown away.
It would be great if you expanded this story with the realistic digestion time and the "aftermath" of disposing the remains of two digested men in a normal apartment.
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Posted by Shyguy9 16 years ago Report
Thank you for the suggestions. I debated several ways to handle the digestion at the end and I agree that how it ended up is a little fast.
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