It was quite an enjoyable read. I've read a number of your other Neko-project works, and I have to say I like the 1st person perspective. I hope you'll continue to write this series like that, though perhaps with different characters perspectives with each chapter, perhaps starting with Sarah? I really like her character and look forward to the possible trouble the two of them could get into.
Thanks for the kind words. I enjoyed the change of pace in this story, too—and I have a goal in mind to write toward, also. Here's a clue: both Dave and Sarah have already appeared, very briefly, in another one of my Neko stories. Can you figure out which one? :)
In a way it's kind of a response to someone who complained about the unrealism of the political situation of the world, in my thread in the works to be shared forum. Yes, the situation is a little messed up. And there are people who recognize it. And there are reasons the world is the way it is, but I don't know if there will ever be a way to show them.
Posted by starvires 16 years ago Report
i realy lick it and i hope you continued.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
Yes, that's what vores do, really lick stuff. And then they swallow it. :)
Glad you liked the story. Please feel free to read any and all of my other stuff too. :)
Posted by Griffinsummoner 16 years ago Report
It was quite an enjoyable read. I've read a number of your other Neko-project works, and I have to say I like the 1st person perspective. I hope you'll continue to write this series like that, though perhaps with different characters perspectives with each chapter, perhaps starting with Sarah? I really like her character and look forward to the possible trouble the two of them could get into.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
Thanks for the kind words. I enjoyed the change of pace in this story, too—and I have a goal in mind to write toward, also. Here's a clue: both Dave and Sarah have already appeared, very briefly, in another one of my Neko stories. Can you figure out which one? :)
Posted by Geno12 16 years ago Report
I love the whole neko civil rights thing kinda makes you realize that they are more than just animals, good work.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
In a way it's kind of a response to someone who complained about the unrealism of the political situation of the world, in my thread in the works to be shared forum. Yes, the situation is a little messed up. And there are people who recognize it. And there are reasons the world is the way it is, but I don't know if there will ever be a way to show them.
Posted by iliapoerion 16 years ago Report
Hooray!
New stories!
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
Hooray! New comments! :)
Posted by starvires 15 years ago Report
good job i hope you continu this story
Posted by starvires 15 years ago Report
good jod i hope you continu this story
Posted by starvires 13 years ago Report
I hope you continu the story.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 13 years ago Report
I have a lot of stories I'd like to continue, and not so much time to do the continuing. :P