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Bandit has a good life ahead of him, until a certain sexy assassin is hired to 'get rid of him'. And of course, she does it in her own, special way. It's lemur vs lemur.
Blackout owned by Slash.
Bandit owned by Me
Contains: F/m vore, soft vore, some violence
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Posted by trainboy911 16 years ago Report
nice ending. that lizard seemed to um whats the word, nice to Bandit.
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Who ever said it was Jerry at the end? I never said it was or wasn't him.
Posted by Slash 16 years ago Report
You made blackouct exactly how i pictured her behaviors to be. Top notch man! I also like how you did the setting and the character placement of bandit as well as your support characters. I was really impressed. The fight and vore scene was well done and on target with blackout's methods. I'm very glad to know that you like my character well enough to do this. Thanks a bunch!
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Tis my pleasure ^_^
My main fear is getting the attitude of the character down correctly. Glad I was able to do it with Blackout.
Posted by Humbug 16 years ago Report
Not sure why I didn't read this 'til now, but hey.
Anyway, I think you did well. The fight scene was very vivid, which is hard to pull off, and the vore, while similar to just about every other vore description ever, had some good details to it that not everything has.
Also, interesting to see Bandit as more than just a pathetic meal.
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thanks you. I always worry if a fight scene comes out well, and vore is almost always repetitive (it's just swallowing), but I try and make it as detailed as I can.
And yes, it was a fun role reversal for Bandit. ^_^