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Sequel to Naughty. The mistress has unfortunately developed feelings and attempts to have her slave see her side of things.
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Posted by blergle 15 years ago Report
I like this a lot. I have to say I'm *extremely* pleased that you did not take the more popular route and have him suddenly do a 180 on his moral stance. I'm left with a taste of tragedy, but also a bittersweet triumph...he "won", and did not reinforce her beliefs or behavior, while she punished herself for them. I could actually imagine a true rehabilitation developing over time with this woman, given these events, and what's more, I actually care what happens in her future, a first for me! Great job. :D
Posted by r0nniel0ng 14 years ago Report
Strange, this one alone has twice as many views as the first one, and the highest number of views of any of my stories to date. A ratio of 1/856 (currently) when it comes to comments, so a big thanks to Blergle from keeping it from 0/856. I'm not really sure who I'm writing this for haha. Mostly just typing out loud I think.
Posted by Readasaur 14 years ago Report
I agree with Blergle.
It was inspiring to see him stand up for what he knew was right and wrong, even if it cost him his life.
And I love the self-justifying she tries to do in order to get away from the guilt.
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
<3