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A woman's thoughts after she swallows someone.

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blergle

Posted by blergle 15 years ago Report

I really enjoy your depictions of the rationalizing that one might to do make evil acts excusable to herself. You are touching on an angle of vore that I have not seen much of at all, keep up the good work!

r0nniel0ng

Posted by r0nniel0ng 15 years ago Report

Thanks man, I really appreciate the comments!

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 15 years ago Report

Yes very nice although I prefer more focus on scatty parts it was a very enjoyable read. Your interpretation and relating of the almost irrational thoughts people get turned on by was spot on.

r0nniel0ng

Posted by r0nniel0ng 15 years ago Report

Thanks! I actually considered focusing on the scatty parts more, but it honestly just isn't my thing.

Rhewin

Posted by Rhewin 15 years ago Report

Great story. I haven't run across a story with the pred feeling guilt and trying to justify themselves. Good work overall.

atak

Posted by atak 14 years ago Report

I quite liked this story! It was a lot of fun to see how she just enjoyed herself way too much to let her lover back out.
I love how much pleasure she got from digesting him alive, even when she knew it must have been quite agonizing for him to be slowly digested alive.
I also like how she tried to rationalize it to herself. Not so much feeling guilty for the cruel fate that he suffered, but more feeling guilty that she really didn't feel guilty about it!

I personally hope she gets to enjoy eating a lot more people. A girl like her deserves it!
Hee, and I would bet that a truly willing snack, would only help increase her pleasure... Since there'd be no need for guilt :3

Luckless

Posted by Luckless 12 years ago Report

This story rocked. Great perspective!

r0nniel0ng

Posted by r0nniel0ng 12 years ago Report

Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it! It was my first story, so I'm glad it still holds up.