the story is very interesting. But the method adopted by the mistress to make her slave one with her by swallowing her is less sensual and a cleche.. She could have made her servant one with her by slowly absorbing her into her body. Merger is more sensual and pleasurable than just swallowing. You only swallow your food but absorb your love and partner..
Anyway, will you rewrite the same above theme with a sort of merger for me?
It was not about making her slave one with her, it was more about eating her. Concerning your idea, I'll give it some thought, it does sound interesting.
For me, Digestion means the prey is digested instead of coming out. Tags can mean different things to different people. Some people think stories that end with the prey being digested should not be labeled Soft Vore.
Posted by kamalan 15 years ago Report
the story is very interesting. But the method adopted by the mistress to make her slave one with her by swallowing her is less sensual and a cleche.. She could have made her servant one with her by slowly absorbing her into her body. Merger is more sensual and pleasurable than just swallowing. You only swallow your food but absorb your love and partner..
Anyway, will you rewrite the same above theme with a sort of merger for me?
Posted by TerminusOmega 15 years ago Report
It was not about making her slave one with her, it was more about eating her. Concerning your idea, I'll give it some thought, it does sound interesting.
Posted by TerminusOmega 13 years ago Report
There is, Misha is not around when Jenna wakes up. Unless you mean a description of the digestion, which I do not do.
Posted by TerminusOmega 13 years ago Report
For me, Digestion means the prey is digested instead of coming out. Tags can mean different things to different people. Some people think stories that end with the prey being digested should not be labeled Soft Vore.
Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report
That was a nice story! I liked how willing Misha was, it made it really sensual. :>
Posted by rugli 10 years ago Report
Do you still lack inspiration to write then try to write sequel or prequel to this.
Posted by TerminusOmega 10 years ago Report
Actually, I am currently working on a sequel right now.
Posted by rugli 10 years ago Report
Any spoilers?
Posted by TerminusOmega 10 years ago Report
Not going to say much, but it will connect this story to my other one.