I'm new at this. I wanted to create a love story about two lovers dealing with a difficult dilema. I wrote this for a friend and his partner. For my first experience, it was just easier for me to make both of my characters same sex. I had a lot of fun with that concept. I hope it's fun for the readers. I like revisiting this to learn more about my own characters. Might it be possible for a predator to want approval from his food for the way it was eaten? For anyone who has read this, I have been making changes to it. I added things and I cut the section written in italics. I've written another story but I want to get this one exactly right before I submit anything else. I never noticed that I had the same problem with this as I did the second story I've submitted. My original had paragraph breaks. I hope I fixed it. I see it looking asier to read now that I've used an odd little trick. I hope it works for the reader.

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