Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report

OK, now that... is just amazingly good! A little masterpiece of a vore story. Just the accumulation of well thought-out details, of character backgrounds and perspectives, all permeated with the slight thrill they're all feeling for the event... Fantastic.

And of course the build-up to the competition itself continues, in spectacular fashion. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when they get started!

Posted by Throku 14 years ago Report

Strange that the talking of eating can be this good ;) I'm really looking forward to seeing some gulping and churning. >;D

I Liked the Cherry-mouth background, must be a tad strange for the competitors, depending on how it's set up and how big the screen is they might look like they've set down to dine on her tongue ;) Seeing as they are the ones eating it might feel a bit strange to "be" in someone else's mouth, just about ready to go down the hatch.
That makes me wonder if any of the girls at the resturant has tried the foultour they are offering their clients?

Posted by kamalan 14 years ago Report

Why every body in the IVC seem to vore people through mouth only? Do not the rules permit other exciting ways of voring? Say, voring through breast, or directly absorbing the people through their bodies? Is there any story or have you written a story of the above genre where women specialized in voring people through their breast and make them one with the in IVC?

Posted by kamalan 14 years ago Report

Why every body in the IVC seem to vore people through mouth only? Do not the rules permit other exciting ways of voring? Say, voring through breast, or directly absorbing the people through their bodies? Is there any story or have you written a story of the above genre where women specialized in voring people through their breast and make them one with them, without any trace, in an IVC? I think there will be more rush of people if they are promised direct absorption in to the breast of the vorish women in the competition rather than getting shrinked and swallowed, which is a rather an unattractive way of becoming one with their goddesses. Direct absorption guarantee the total and eternal merger with the vore women but reaching them through swallowing only ensures only partial merger.

Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report

This is a story about humans, set in a near future in which shrinking technology has been invented. Humans cannot simply absorb one another.

Please avoid leaving a comment which is simply a request for a different type of vore. It's considered rude.

Posted by huitcinquante 14 years ago Report

I've just read your three or four last stories so i have to congratulate you for that !
It was a great pleasure to enjoy to psychological background of the characters, and perharps moreover to live their internal experience about eating their so spécial food. In this kind of literature, you have demonstrated that, details are always so important. You really got it !
I'll fanatically expect your next works, and i'm ever completly nuts about the Chicago IVC 2...
Thanks a lot.

Posted by bedfordsb 14 years ago Report

Thanks to everyone for their helpful comments, and especially to FS - I should have pointed out that the IVC is a fantasy series set in the future - it could help to think of it as science fiction because it depends entirely on new technology which allows people to be shrunk. In reality it must be unlikely that will ever happen (unless anyone knows differently) but it makes for interesting vore scenarios.

Part 2 to follow very shortly - I am just tweaking and finishing it