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Shelby aproached her car slowly extending every possible moment the mouse had away from his doom. But it was only about a minute before finaly ariving at the trunk of her car. The mouse lay in her cart still twitching and making silent grunts as tears fell from his eyes. The sight of it just made shelby want to put him out of her sights. She reached for the handle and pulled open the trunk. Then proceeded to lift up the mouse to put him in the empty trunk. She didn't want to have to look at the creature she was killing more than she had to. He felt the arms around him. They were warm but still left an icy chill where they sat. It wasn't long before he was lifted up out of the steel box that contained him. All he could do was cry and whimper the shot he had been given before still froze him where he was all he could do now was think of a way out. I'm at her mercy she controls my fate mabey I can get her to let me go if I make her feel bad about this mabey I still have a chance. By now he was already inside the dark cavornous trunk door closes in frount of him. The floor was made of hard plastic and had fur on it, most likley left over from the previous mouse that took the same journy he was taking now. There was another click and sound of a door opening at the frount of the car some ruffuling and then a rumble underneath him. The car had been started there was no going back now. He let out one last cry as the car pulled out of it's parking space and out onto the road. Hey guys I know this one might not be too exciting for some of you and I know it really wasn't this one was just kind of of had to be here page to make the series complete. But I had an itrisring idea of an alternate ending to this comic tell me what you think mabey I'll do it. But yah hope you all like!!^^

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dragonfred

Posted by dragonfred 14 years ago Report

Awesome hope to see more! and you can do what you want if you want too! :P

voreme

Posted by voreme 14 years ago Report

Thanks glad you like!!!^^

dragonfred

Posted by dragonfred 14 years ago Report

Yup :)

Fischie

Posted by Fischie 14 years ago Report

I did not expect the mose to have some last sraps of hope in it. that was a surprise.
And if the inevitable(?) comes this would add to the dramatic aspect of your story. Nice concept

voreme

Posted by voreme 14 years ago Report

His last hope will only be revealed after the original story is over an you will see how I make it tie in with the end of the comic.^^ but hold in mind these are two differnt stories in one he dies one he lives... Don't worry it will make alot more sence later