Hi Anashi, I really enjoyed your "Anashi meets Bittersweet" story and I was very excited to read your next one featuring a female pred--just as I expected I was not disappointed :) Very lush descriptions of both people and settings, and a creative tongue-sex scene made this story both very unique and very enjoyable. The scatty end was a nice treat as well ;) As before it could use a little proofreading but overall it was highly enjoyable. Thank you for sharing this with us!
I want to thank you all for your comments. ^^ I am glad that you enjoyed my story. Also, I welcome more comments like the one posted by Indighost. If you can provide me with constructive thoughts on how I can better my writing I will happily listen. ^^
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Posted by miranda_dragon 15 years ago Report
Well done :)
Posted by Anashi 15 years ago Report
Thanks much. :)
Posted by deleted188 15 years ago Report
That was really fun to read :D Thank you!
Posted by Gelenor 15 years ago Report
A very interesting concept. I like it.
Posted by Indighost 15 years ago Report
Hi Anashi, I really enjoyed your "Anashi meets Bittersweet" story and I was very excited to read your next one featuring a female pred--just as I expected I was not disappointed :) Very lush descriptions of both people and settings, and a creative tongue-sex scene made this story both very unique and very enjoyable. The scatty end was a nice treat as well ;) As before it could use a little proofreading but overall it was highly enjoyable. Thank you for sharing this with us!
Posted by Anashi 15 years ago Report
I want to thank you all for your comments. ^^ I am glad that you enjoyed my story. Also, I welcome more comments like the one posted by Indighost. If you can provide me with constructive thoughts on how I can better my writing I will happily listen. ^^
Posted by Foxgut 8 years ago Report
Violet is such a lovely character, who makes even lovelier piles~ This has always been a favorite story of mine.