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An intrepid trainer by the name of Sophia Luckholde hunts down a Miltank and attempts to capture it... But who ends up capturing who?
A request! By Gamdann. Why would I do a request? I liked the idea, that's why! Good ol' fashioned om-nom-nomming. Of course, if it weren't requested as non-digestion, the ending probably would've gone a little differently.
I'm not sure why, but I decided to use the same trainer who was eaten by Arceus in 493 vs 26. That explains the Raichu. Speaking of Raichu, what was it doing while Sophie was being eaten? Easy. "Rai," actually translated to, "I'm just going to let you suffer the consequences of your actions." So there.
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Hahahahaha...your side-stories are the best...Non-digestion was a bit of a change...but,it was a good one...especially for this request~
...I didn't know you were taking requests.:3
Posted by Sy0p 13 years ago Report
Heh, well, I didn't really advertise. It was just a random PM out of nowhere! I was gonna say I didn't take requests, but... Who am I to turn down an interesting idea?
Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Hmmm-hmmm...quite~
...I'll be thinking about that...expect a PM in the next few days...:)
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
It could do with a bit of fleshing out-- I dislike a writer having to explain to me what happened at this point or that in their story when they could have just written it into the story itself-- but other than that this was pretty cute. I'm a fan of non-fatal particularly when it comes with a lesson for the prey, but I do wish you had explained why it was non digestive. I mean did the Miltank just deposit the girl into a special stomach while it continued the rest of its 'grazing'? Little bits of detail like that can make a nice story into a good story.
Posted by Sy0p 13 years ago Report
Admittedly, I really don't care much for non-fatal. Once the prey's in the belly, if digestion hasn't occurred... Where is there to go? Of course, I realize that's silly for me to think. There's definitely story to be squeezed out of what I skimmed over. Thank you for the advice, I'll take it to heart. ^.^
Posted by twilightwings 13 years ago Report
I actually love non-fatal so I liked this :D
Posted by Guzame 12 years ago Report
i loved this story. it'd be amazing if you ever made an alternate digestion ending to this. <3
Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 11 years ago Report
Nice story I just wish that Miltank would keep Sophie inside of her tummy for way longer