Darn! I do - but sometimes I have a problem when I send the story to the website. I have to check on this and edit the story a little. I did notice one thing. It does have the paragraphs but you are right, a little spacing would make them easier to notice. I think the change in how this site works is something I'm going to have to learn more about. I'll see what I can do. Thank you for the comment. I have two more written that I decided to add but I wanted to wait. I appreciate it when People share their observations with me. I haven't returned the favor yet but That doesn't mean that I don't appreciate the gifts of other writers and artists. I have a certain mental picture of how my preds think. I hope they don't seem too sappy. They never show mercy or pass up a live meal but they just don't want you to be too upset when they eat you.
Posted by dimensione510 13 years ago Report
It's a good story, but very hard to read. When you make new paragraphs, you should add a space, so that it doesn't become a huge wall of text.
Posted by printz 13 years ago Report
Darn! I do - but sometimes I have a problem when I send the story to the website. I have to check on this and edit the story a little. I did notice one thing. It does have the paragraphs but you are right, a little spacing would make them easier to notice. I think the change in how this site works is something I'm going to have to learn more about. I'll see what I can do. Thank you for the comment. I have two more written that I decided to add but I wanted to wait. I appreciate it when People share their observations with me. I haven't returned the favor yet but That doesn't mean that I don't appreciate the gifts of other writers and artists. I have a certain mental picture of how my preds think. I hope they don't seem too sappy. They never show mercy or pass up a live meal but they just don't want you to be too upset when they eat you.