Hermione is captured by Bellatrix LeStrange, the most sadistic mentally ill witch there is.
How will this proceed? Take a look and find out.
Hint: Someone gets eaten.
I normally don't write fanfiction, but I thought Bellatrix was hot in one of the HP movies, so I could not resist.
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Posted by Indighost 15 years ago Report
Not bad! I liked the lines like "her eyes shone of madness" and the ironic joke at "“What kind of sick mind can think of something like this?”" You were able to capture the characters prety well :)
Posted by Bright 15 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad to hear that you liked it.
Posted by Jammacca 15 years ago Report
No idea why this triggered my 'F/m' watch tag, but I'm not going to complain. Always good to see some Potter-related vore.
Posted by Bright 15 years ago Report
I mislabeled it at first.
But glad to see you like it though.
Posted by Maurt899 14 years ago Report
cool story, we could use more HP vore, i mean seriously, the books leave so much open potential!
like your use of polyjuice for the jaw thing. good imagination.
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment. I had this going around in my head for some time and eventually came to the conclusion that if I wanted it right, I would have to write it myself.
Posted by iwillnomu 14 years ago Report
Good story, i dont think polyjuice can shrink though... odd how thats the only thing i notice:)
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
I am not sure if I follow.
Bellatrix gave a shrinking juice to Hermione, but drank the polyjuice herself.
Posted by iwillnomu 14 years ago Report
Wow, i am a moron bright.
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
Nah, it's okay. Everyone can miss a word or a sentence.
Posted by iwillnomu 14 years ago Report
:) i like the story
Posted by pridmore2 7 years ago Report
do a sequel please
Posted by Bright 7 years ago Report
I appreciate the desire to see one, but I don't feel like writing a sequel.
Posted by pridmore2 6 years ago Report
why dont you have bellatrix eat ron